Please read first post for a good bye

Monday, December 27, 2010

The Beginning of an End-Part1

Markstar watched the five newest apprentices, his kits, pad out of the Apprentice's Den. It had been four nights since their ceremony, and they loved it. Wanderpaw looked around for her mentor, Dreamsea. Was I right to choose Dreamsea as a mentor...? Markstar shook off the doubt, as he knew Dreamsea was capable. Markstar got up, and padded to the fresh-kill pile. It wasn't large, but large enough for each cat to at least get three bites. The prey was still running, but Markstar could feel a sharp change in the wind that day. Cold air and frost was coming, and they needed to stock up. Some warriors and apprentices were busy making holes to bury the prey in. It was a long process, as the ground was frozen. Markstar padded over to them.

"Just make it as deep as you can. Don't rip your claws out trying to dig in this, because if you have no claws, you won't be able to fight."

Markstar smiled. A few cat's had already had a torn claw from this job, so he didn't want to push it.

Markstar was about to pad out of the camp, when a cat flew at him from the tunnel. Then the whole patrol followed, their fur on end, and their eyes wild. Markstar shook out his fur, and stared at the leader of the patrol, Bluegaze.

"What's wrong Bluegaze!?"

He had never seen Bluegaze so terrified, he relied on the older, blind, warrior, as he usually could talk some sense into a situation. he was usually calm. But Bluegaze's sightless eyes weren't looking at Markstar, they were fixed on Everlight. Everlight's eyes were wide with fear. He heard Bluegaze whisper.

"It's happening... The destruction is here..."

Then Bluegaze's head snapped back to the entrance of camp, his eyes wide with terror. Markstar looked at the entrance. Nothing's there, so why is Bluegaze so terrified- Markstar was pulled from his thoughts as a snarling cat leaped on him. He yowled, and kicked the cat's belly with his hind legs, sending the cat flying. Markstar leaped up, his eyes wild. The clearing stank with the stench of BlackClan, but he had never seen these warriors before. Then, Fierystar's words rang in his head. I have more warriors then you can imagine, and they shall destroy LakeClan. Markstar looked around, searching in vain for his kits. They hadn't had much battle training, they would be killed with in the first moments of the battle!

Then Markstar yowled when he saw Wanderpaw was pinned down, a large tom biting into her neck. Markstar snarled and leaped at the tom, ripping into his shoulders and face. The tom looked shocked, then ran off. Markstar grabbed Wanderpaw's scruff. She was still breathing, but how badly hurt was she? Markstar ran to the medicine cat den. He saw that Nestflame had the secret room opened, and Markstar dragged Wanderpaw into it. Jayflight was inside, getting herbs ready, and he immediately leaped to help Wanderpaw. Markstar ran back out, and got his four other kits, and herded them into the secret room. Blazedpaw protested, saying he could fight.

"No! You'll be killed!"

Markstar threw them in, entrusting that Adder would guard the room well. Queens and kits were already inside also. Good. Everyone who can't fight is safe. Markstar then leaped into the battle, finding himself fighting beside Strongspirit. But where was Fierystar?

::---::

Erol stood in the BlackClan camp. He knew that there was a battle raging inside LakeClan, but he had to take care of business. He could feel it was time. Fierystar sat in the middle of the camp, listening. The whole clan sat around the perimeter of the camp, some scared and worried, others glowing triumphantly. Erol was one who sat in the circle, his eyes scanning the circle, taking into perspective where all of Fierystar's loyal warriors were. They all sat behind Fierystar in the circle, and Erol sat across from them. Erol then stood up, and walked onto the center of the camp, facing Fierystar, his claws unsheathed. Erol snarled.

"Your rule over this clan is over Fierystar! Step down, or I'll make you. I am leader now."

Fierystar snarled, then laughed.

"Never! This is my clan. And a weakling like you would never defeat me."

Erol looked down, shaking his head.

"I didn't want to have to fight... But if I have to, then I will!"

Erol snarled and he leaped at Fierystar as he said the last line. Fierystar was taken by surprise. Then regained himself as he felt Erol's claws dig into his shoulders. Fierystar flipped Erol over easily, and ripped into Erol's chest. Erol's body convulsed with pain as the skin was ripped away. But then he leaped up, but only half way, and sank his teeth into Fierystar's neck. Fierystar's eyes widened, and he tore himself away, blood flowing from his wound. Fierystar then placed his paw on Erol neck, claws digging in. Erol gasped for air, and Fierystar smirked.

"Any last words...?"

Erol snarled, and choked out a sound, blood trickling from his mouth.

"Y-ya. Hope your stomach gets better."

Erol snarled, and with all of his effort, kicked his back legs into Fierystar's stomach, claws tearing into the flesh. Fierystar's eyes widened as his body arched, and then gasped as he was flung across the clearing, a large gaping wound in his stomach. Erol stumbled and got up, his paws threatening to collapse beneath him. Erol felt light-headed as he was losing a lot of blood from his chest. Then he stumbled to his knees, his paws tucked underneath him. Erol watched Fierystar's breathing stop, then start again shortly after. Fierystar struggled to sit, blood still lightly flowing from his wounds, though they had been mostly healed by the Dark Forest when he had lost a life. Fierystar snarled, then looked around to see many cats baring their teeth, ready to attack. Erol choked.

"Leave. Or my warriors will kill you."

Then Erol looked at the large crowd.

"Anyone who doesn't want to stay, you better go with Fierystar. If I find any of his followers still here, they shall be attacked mercilessly."

A quarter of the clan got up and surrounded Fierystar, and then the group padded out of the camp, hopefully forever. Erol then let his head sink into his paws, his breathing ragged. Erol saw the medicine cat come up to him, and treat his wounds before Erol passed out. 

::---::

Ridgefeather blinked open his eyes. He was still in the cage, but he was no longer restrained, and no tubes were attached to him. Ridgefeather stood up shakily, and saw two Two-leg's staring in at him. They were talking, but he couldn't understand a word they said.

"So you jsut found him, almost dead in your back yard?"

The female nodded.

"Yes. he must be a wild cat. There are wild cat's in the forests back there."

The man in the white coat nodded.

"He's ready to leave. He'll be a bit shaky. If he's wild like you he is, take it slow. It'll be weird for him, especially with that cast. We were lucky to save that leg. It had been broken in seven places."

The female nodded.

"So I can take him today?"

The man nodded.

"Ya. Let me just get a carrier."

The female waited, and opened the door of the cage. Ridgefeather cringed backward, but didn't hiss. He was more scared then wanting to attack. The Two-leg's had saved his life, hadn't they? Did that mean he should be scared of them? Ridgefeather saw the white coat two-leg come back with a different cage, and he carefully grabbed Ridgefeather's scruff. Ridgefeather shook as he was gently put into the new cage. The female two-leg said some other words, then walked out of the Two-leg place.

Ridgefeather blinked at the brightness of the sky, and turned his head into the darkness of the cage. 

Ridgefeather knew he had fallen asleep, but he was awoken when he head a meow of welcome. Am I back home...? But when he opened his eyes he was still in the cage. Ridgefeather sighed, still feeling very tired. The cage he was in stopped bouncing, and he turned his head to looked out the entrance. Another cat was sitting there, her head tilted. 

"Why don't you come out! No one will hurt you. You're a wild cat, right? I used to be a stray... but not wild. My name is Maple. What's yours?"

Ridgefeather turned around, his eyes sullen. He slowly crept forward, and stepped out of the cage, his hind leg felt like a dead weight because of the cast. As soon as all four of his paws were out of the cage, his front feet slipped forward, and his back feet backwards. He yowled in surprise, and fell to the ground. 

"My name is Ridgefeather... I lived in a clan. "

Maple nodded.

"Want me to show you around? You live here now!"

Ridgefeather sighed, and shook his head.

"I just want to lie down. I want to go home."

Maple blinked, sincerity in her eyes.

"I know you do, but, you almost died. Here, you can live a safe life. Come on. You can lie down over here."

Maple padded away, and Ridgefeather padded after her, or more like clunked and slipped after her. he sighed in relief as he felt the ground change. This ground was easier to grip on, and he looked around. He had never been in a two-leg nest before, and it was huge. And warm. Then he heard Maple meow, and saw her sitting on a weird log.

"What's that?"

Maple laughed.

"It's a couch! It's superrr soft! Come on up!"

Ridgefeather judged the height, and tried to jump up, but couldn't because of his leg. He turned his head when he heard someone come in. He saw the two-leg standing in the entrance of the area, a slight frown on her face. She then walked away, and soon came back with some boxes. Ridgefeather stared at the devices, not sure what they were.

"Come on. They're to help you get up."

Ridgefeather stumbled onto the first box, and shook with uncertainty, but finally he was on the couch. The couch was soft, softer then the moss that he used to sleep on. He sighed and curled up in a ball, feeling lonely. Then he lifted his head in surprise when he felt Maple curl up beside him, but he was too tired to object, and he drifted into sleep.

49 comments:

✠Ember✠ said...

Blazedpaw growled "I can fight!" he still called through the secret door

~-~Blazedpaw~-~

Silhouettepaw rolled her eyes "Do you WANT to get killed!? I mean, we hve only had four days of training!"

~-~Silhouettepaw~-~

Yellowstripe beamed from in the crowd. Fireystar was gone.... Forever! He could stay in BlackClan, a good, better BlackClan! Erol would survive, he'd lead BlackClan, to a brighter light.

He saw Mossyclaw in the crowd, she had returned to BlackClan! She must have seen all that had happened! This was absolutley perfect!

~-~Yellowstripe~-~

Birchstorm threw a tom into a tree growling. The tom flinched, then lay still. Birchstorm was about to attack a she-cat when he heard a cry

"Dad!"

Birchstorm froze "Fleckedpaw!"

He ran over to Fleckedpaw, who was pinned down by a huge tom, three others surrounding him.

Birchstorm growled, getting the cat's attention "You can get off my son," he hissed "Or, you will all die."

The toms just laughed and the largest one said "What'cha gonna do about it!"

Birchstorm growled and leapt onto the tom pinning Fleckedpaw down, he ripped at his throat, though, not enough to kill him right away.

The others hissed in fury and began to approach, Birchstorm whispered in Fleckedpaw's ear "You take the smallest one, I'll take the other two."

Fleckedpaw nodded, and Birchstorm flicked his tail and they attacked. The two walked away, leaving an unconsious heap of cats on the floor.

~-~Birchy/Fleckedpaw~-~

☪Dream said...

*Everlight growled, and looked at Bluegaze.*

I can fight? Can't I? The destrcution is upon us, because of you and me Bluegaze. Because of you and I.... It's our fault, and now we have to watch everyone pass.

*Bluegaze growled.*

Just fight!

*Bluegaze leaped into the battle, Everlight behind him. Everlight unsheathed her claws, unsure. She hadn't been allowed to fight before now. Would she make it? Then she leaped at a she-cat, and sunk her claws into the cat's flash. Her eyes widened in surprise, then calm pleasure, and she tore her teeth into the cat's neck.*

:~~Everlight/Bluegaze:

✠Ember✠ said...

Strongspirit had a tom pinned down. "BlackClan will pay!" she hissed, but suddenly a force knocked her off her feet, sending her skidding across the floor. She collided with a tree a yowled in pain. She saw the tom looming over her before blackness consumed her vision

~-~Strongspirit~-~

(Who is not dead. BTW Just unconsious)

☪Dream said...

*Markstar looked around for Strongspirit. She had just been beside him.*

Strongspirit!

*He yowled over the roar of the battle, but got no answer.*

:~~Markstar:

✠Ember✠ said...

Falcon saw a flash of tortoiseshell pelt. "Strongspirit?" he asked, then he saw a tom sinking his claws into her stomach, she was barely alive. He pounced on the tom, keeping him busy. Wrencall passed by and he shouted to her "Wrencall! Take Strongspirit to your uncle, she's badly hurt!" he yowled. She nodded and Dragged Strongspirit into the medicine cat den.

Falcon hissed clawing at the tom.

~-~Falcon~-~

☪Dream said...

*Markstar yowled when he saw Wrencall dragging Strongspirit.*

What happened!?

:~~Markstar:

✠Ember✠ said...

"Dunno. She was probably knocked out by some cat, she's badly injured. I gotta get her in the medicine cat den right away,"

~-~Wrencall~-~

☪Dream said...

*Markstar hissed.*

I'll take her!

*He grabbed Strongspirit's scruff from Wrencall and raced to the medicine cat's den, his heart pounding. Don't let her die, Wake! Please!*

:~~Markstar:

✠Ember✠ said...

Nestflame rushed over "What happened?"

~-~Nestflame~-~

☪Dream said...

I don't know! She was attacked! Just save her!

*Markstar's eyes were wide with worry.*

:~~Markstar:

✠Ember✠ said...

Nestflame nodded "Markstar, calm down. I will."

He took Strongspirit's scruff and gently set her down, rushing around putting herbs on her wounds "I've stopped all the bleeding, and cleaned all her wounds. Now, she just has to regain consiousness. luckily, she only dislocated her shoulder, but there is a bruise along her back, luckily, her spine didn't break, or crack, but, she must have been rammed into something really hard. A rock maybe? Well, anyway, it will be painful for her to move for weeks, maybe even moons."

~-~nestflame~-~

☪Dream said...

*Markstar shook.*

Will she have a normal life again?

:~~Markstar:

✠Ember✠ said...

"Yes, of course, It is only a bruise, a large, painful bruise. But that could never keep a cat like her down. She'll be just a little stiff after about, three weeks to a moon. A minor holdback. Though, she will have to take some herbs for a while, to loosen up the mussles that have tightened to try to cushion the blow she took, and to strengthen them."

~-~Nestflame~-~

☪Dream said...

*Markstar looked at Strongspirit.*

What if she cracked her spine? What then!?

:~~Markstar:

✠Ember✠ said...

"Then, she will most likely be paralyzed from the waist down. But that is highly unlikely Markstar. She was lucky."

~-~Nestflame~-~

☪Dream said...

We won't win this battle. I can feel it. All this blood, is for nothing. We're all going to die.

:~~Markstar:

✠Ember✠ said...

Nestflame stiffened "Markstar. You should have more faith in your clan."

~-~Nestflame~-~

☪Dream said...

Have you seen the number of attackers out there! they overpower even us! Their strength is far greater then ours!

:~~Markstar:

✠Ember✠ said...

"StarClan, Markstar. StarClan, have faith in them. Your youngest kits are safe, you have your entire clan fighting to save what they love, Your mate will live, and StarClan is on your side."

~-~Nestflame-~

☪Dream said...

How! We're all dying! Wanderpaw and Strongspirit are both hurt! How am I supposed to know that other's aren't!? We're all going to die. Bluegaze even said that destruction was upon us! StarClan wouldn't have let this happen.

:~~Markstar:

✠Ember✠ said...

"Markstar, you should know that StarClan does not have power over everything, THINGS HAPPEN, but they will try to help,"

He put more herbs on the wonded cats

~-~Nestflame~-~

☪Dream said...

They aren't trying or they would have warned me! They won't even tell me what Bluegaze and Everlight are up too! They never told Dreamstar either!

:~~Markstar:

✠Ember✠ said...

"What if they didn't KNOW about the battle, have you ever thought of that? This," his tail gestured toward the battle "Is the Dark Forest at work."

~-~Nestflame~-~

☪Dream said...

Everything I've heard about StarClan is that StarClan is supposed to be there to warn you! Are you telling me all I ever heard was lies!?

:~~Markstar:

✠Ember✠ said...

"StarClan cannot warn you about what they do not know of. Those cats are NOT all powerful Markstar. They were once cats like you and me. They cannot fix every problem!"

~-~Nestflame~-~

☪Dream said...

Well then everything's I've ever heard about StarClan is a lie! Everyone's going to die! It started with Stormbreak, then Ridgefeather!

:~~Markstar:

✠Ember✠ said...

Something flickered in Nestflame's eyes and he hissed "Ridgefeather is NOT Dead! And You don't need to remind me of my failure as a mentor to him. Now go fight with your clan. Unlike them, you have nine lives and yet you hide in here."

~-~Nestflame~-~

☪Dream said...

Ridgefeather IS dead! Or he would be here! Everyone's dying one by one!

:~~Markstar:

✠Ember✠ said...

Nestflame hissed "No. He. Is. Not. And get OUT of the medicine cat den, leave me to treat my patients. Or keep me busy and let your mate and daughter die." he turned back to them, making poltices.

~-~Nestflame~-~

☪Dream said...

*Markstar growled.*

Why can't you just accept the fact that Ridgefeather has died! The way Bluegaze described his state, no one could have saved him! StarClan is abandoning us.

:~~Markstar:

✠Ember✠ said...

"I told you to GET OUT!" Nestflame hissed

~-~Nestflame~-~

☪Dream said...

This is my clan!

:~~Markstar:

✠Ember✠ said...

"Doesn't seem like it since your letting them die on their own. You do not even have FAITH in them!"

~-~Nestflame~-~

☪Dream said...

StarClan isn't helping, now are they?

:~~Markstar:

✠Ember✠ said...

"They are. They are keeping your mate and daughter alive aren't they?"

~-~Nestflame~-~

☪Dream said...

They didn't keep Dreamstar alive!

:~~Markstar:

✠Ember✠ said...

"It was her time Markstar!"

~-~Nestflame~-~

☪Dream said...

It shouldn't have been! She had four lives left, and they were ripped out of her! Fierystar killed her! if any cat was killed by Fierystar, then it was defiantly not their time!

:~~Markstar:

(Wow, this convo changes fast.

1. Strongspirit.
2. StarCla
3. Ridgefeather
4. StarClan
5. Dreamstar

xP )

✠Ember✠ said...

(Lolz :P)

"Well what if she was sent back? Sent back here? I've heard legends of that. When a cat dies and it isn't out time, they send it back, but as another cat!"

~-~Nestflame~-~

☪Dream said...

*Markstar rolled his eyes.*

You don't think i already know that!? Dreamsea. Is. Dreamstar. But what good is her being alive again? She didn't need a second chance! it's just causing pain for everybody who knows!

:~~Markstar:

✠Ember✠ said...

Nestflame rolled his eyes "Didn't I just SAY? It wasn't her time."

~-~Nestflame~-~

☪Dream said...

She shouldn't have been sent back! Cause she's not leader! She doesn't love Rippleblaze, so I doubt this is because it wasn't her time!

:~~Markstar:

✠Ember✠ said...

"Whatever Markstar. You were just blaming StarClan for killing her and now your blaming them for bringing her back. You know what. Just stay in here like the coward you are. I will keep trying to the very end."

~-~Nestflame~-~

☪Dream said...

*Markstar snarled.*

How dare you call your leader a coward! StarClan are the cowards!

:~~Markstar:

✠Ember✠ said...

"Your calling everyone you cared about, a coward. Stormbreak is a coward? Sorrelpaw, Strongspirit's sister, Is a coward?" he asked quietly

~-~Nestflame~-~

☪Dream said...

Nestflame. You saved my life once. But will you be able to save all of their lives!?

*He turned his head towards where the fighting roared.*

:~~Markstar:

*Dreamsea panted and looked around. Images kept on filling her head. Images that she recognized, but yet, she doesn't remember ever being there. Then she stumbled backwards as she saw the image before her. It was from her dream. Where the shadow had been thrown across her, and she had died. But now, she saw it as another cat would. Her eyes widened, when she saw a cat that looked exactly like her. the battle zoned out around her, and she saw the silver tabby cat she had seen many times. he dipped his head.*

It is time you knew the truth Dreamsea. My name is Cloudriver. I was once your mate. You were once Dreamstar, leader of LakeClan. You were killed in the scene you just saw. Soaringheart was once your mate, and Rippleblaze. Him too. he loves you with all of his heart. I do too. StarClan gave you another chance. Another life. Enjoy it Dreamsea. Pick the right choice. Find a tom you love with all your heart. Don't let anyone influence you. Good-bye... Dreamstar. My love.

*Cloudriver dipped his head, and Dreamsea once again found herself among the battle.*

:~~Dreamsea:

✠Ember✠ said...

Nestflame nodded "I will Markstar."

~-~Nestflame~-~

☪Dream said...

No you won't be able too!

:~~Markstar:

✠Ember✠ said...

"I unlike you, Have faith. Your sounding like a little kit. Now Shut you mouth! I don't care if your leader. I'm older, and a medicine cat. I will NOT take disrespect as much as you will!"


~-~Nestflame~-~