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My name is Dreamstar. I am the proud leader of this clan. I have made many mistakes, but some worse then others. I have served loyally, and broke the warrior code. Though, StarClan allows my relationship with Ripplestar, the leader of MarshClan. I am not perfect, I don't try to be. I try to set an example, and hope you'll follow. I deserve to be here through the way I act.
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1 – 200 of 510 Newer› Newest»[Sniffs air and smells a squirrel and a vole]Soaringheart there is a vo...
I know.I am going to get it.[Pounces on vole and kills it with one quick bite to the neck.Says thanks to Starclan.]
Nice catch!I am going to catch that squirrel![chases squirrel but doesn't catch it.]Mousedung!
Oh well let's head back to camp.We caught quite a bit of prey.
[Caught a vole,2 mice,a fish,and bird.]
Dreamstar and Soarinheart.
*sniffs*
vole!
[stalks and catches]
~shinepaw~
*falls* oof!
-Cloverkit
Cloverkit?What are you doing here?
~shinepaw~
I followed you cause I was bord.
-Cloverkit
I followed your scent. I was good, wasn't I?
-Cloverkit
Yeah but...YOUR NOT SUPPOSED TO LEAVE THE CAMP!
~shinepaw~
Why, I was curious. Besides, I'm not alone because your here.
-Cloverkit
Yes ,but i just left the nursery so i don't really count.
~shinepaw~
Does that mean I have to go back?
-Cloverkit
*sniff* I smell something that I've smelt before. . . somewhere. Do you smell it?
-Cloverkit
Probbaly just prey you might want to go back to the nursery.
~shinepaw
Ok. Bye. *sigh*
-Cloverkit
Catches 3 fish.
Dreamstar
[pants heavily]Now where is Shinepaw?
Hi!
~shinepaw~
Hey.Now let me show you how to hunt.Okay!Crouch down and don’t move your tail.Step as lightly as you can.A mouse will hear you if you don’t.Now stalk forward,and pounce.Now let’s try to hunt for the clan.
Step lightly,keep your tail still,and then pounce when you in pouncing range.Then when or if you catch it,quickly bite it in the back of the neck,to kill it.Then lastly give thanks to StarClan for this prey that gave it’s life to feed us.
ok
*sniff*
mouse
[stalks carfuly catches]
[thanks starclan]
~shinepaw~
I have to go.
Bye!
~shinepaw~
Bye.I had to go too.
Okay now time to teach you how to hunt.These techniques will be with you for as long as you live.So listen closely.
Step lightly,keep your tail still,and then pounce when you in pouncing range.Then when or if you catch it,quickly bite it in the back of the neck,to kill it.Then lastly give thanks to StarClan for this prey that gave it’s life to feed us.
Okay.Now try to scent some prey.
*sniffs*
vole!
*carefully stalks vole*
*catches vole, thanks starclan*
I caught it!
-Honeypaw
Very good!You are a born hunter!Let's try to catch some more.Let's go to the lake.I will teach you how to fish[goes to lake]Okay.You can either sit on the rocks or dive into the water.What do you want to do?I like diving.
Soaringheart
I want to try diving. It sounds more fun.
-Honeypaw
Okay.So all you have to do is jump in the water.When you see a fish.Swim as silently and slowly as possible.Make sure you take a breath before you go and get it.You might run out of air,So when you get close enough,launch yourself forward and extend your paw.Unsheathe your claws,and swipe.And then you have caught a fish.It is harder to catch a fish then it is to catch a vole.So just try your best.(Remember LakeClan cats can see under water.)
*jumps into lake and spots fish*
*swims after it*
*tries to reach fish, runs out of air and bursts to the top*
I missed it.
-Honeypaw
Oh well.Try again.But this time,when you spot a fish,first come to the surface,then go back down to get the fish.
And did you see my new post?On the front page?If not then go look at it.
Soaringheart
I will be back soon.I have to have supper.
ok bye Soaringheart
-Honeypaw
yes i saw it, thanks! when you come back, I'll be in the apprentice's den.
-Honeypaw
Frostpelt can you teach me how to catch fish?I want to get ahead in case kill clan starts to attack and i might need to help build the freshkill pile after the battle.
~shinepaw~
*walks to lake spots a killclan cat*
~shinepaw~
Sees KillClan cat too.Go back to camp now!Get Soaringheart and Honeypaw!Now!
I'm back Dreamstar! *pants*Do you want anymore cats?
~shinepaw~
No i think that will be enough.I thik that this cat is the leader of KillClan.Blurstar.This is bad.She might be looking for places to hide and then attack.
I am here Dreamstar.Is that Blurstar?
Yes.
Oh,great StarClan no!
Soaringheart where is Honeypaw?
I told her to come.So she should be here.
Soaringheart, I'm here
-Honeypaw
should i get her she may be in the nursery! and I think i know why blurstar is here!
~shinepaw~
nvm
~shinepaw~
What's that weird scent?
-Honeypaw
xcept the blurstar part!
~shinepaw~
Okay good.Dreamstar![hisses]WHAT IS THAT![points with tail]
[Yowls]KILLCLAN!The whole clan!this is bad!Really bad!
Should I get stormclan or do you want me to fight?
~shinepaw~
Wait why do you think Blurstar is here?
Oh no! What do we do?! Do we have enough cats, Is the nursary protected?
-Honeypaw
We might need help!
-Honeypaw
she got info from grayclaw then she came to attack!
~shinepaw~
Do you want me to go get more warriors or apprentices?
-Honeypaw
Honeypaw!Calm down!You can not get freaked out when there is a battle.That is one of the worst things you could do before a battle.Do you see Dreamstar freaking out?No,and she has kits on the way.Stay calm,and you will be able to think properly.
Soaringheart
Maybe.I don't know.But what could Grayclaw say to KillClan about us?
Dreamstar
Shinepaw run back to camp and warn everyone!I will post it too.
Dreamstar
well grayclaw could say that you are getting weaker since you have kits on the way and she could be listening to our clan meetings since she was staying in the elders den!
~shinepaw~
sorry, it's my first battle.
-Honeypaw
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS MY DREAM I HAD!!! YOUR KIST MIGHT COME NEXT!!!! O H STARCLAN HELP US!!!!!
~SHINEPAW~
Right.Let's go back to the camp and get ready.Hurry up.We can not stay here and try to keep them busy.There are too many of them.Hurry!
Dreamstar
We're here to help!
-Poppypaw
Ya, We heard that Killclan's here.
-Snowpaw
Go back to camp!We are fighting in the camp![Also Cloverkit,you can play one more cat]
[Runs back,as fast as possible]
i TOLD THE APPRENTICES AND WARRIORS TO COME HERE! SANDFEATHER AND TIGERPATH ARE GUARDING THE NURSERY!
~SHINEPAW~
(k thxs)
-Cloverkit
We're going bac to camp!
-Snowpaw
Post attack under first post
WHICH DEN ARE WE IN?
-Honeypaw
*twig snaps*
Poppypaw?
[blurstar comes out of ferns]
Have you come back for more blurstar?-shinepaw
Oh its you tiny apprentice!-blurstar
Shinepaw, are you he- Blurstar, what are you doing back in Lakeclan territory!?
-Poppypaw
*catches 1 squrrel and 2 mice*
-Snowpaw
*catches 2 fish*
-Honeystream
*spots fish in water*
OOH, I am going to get that fish.*sits at water's edge, and finally lashes out and catches fish.*-Foxspirit
Good job, Foxspirit.*purrs* Honeystream why don't you try for prey/-Grassheart
Ok.
*sniffs out vole, stalks it and kills with one blow. Thanks Starclan*
-Honeystream
Forestflame, are you here?
-Cloverpaw
Good job, Honeystream! Now if you don't mind me leaving, I have to go and find Maplepaw, so bye!!!-Grassheart
*sniffs out a mouse*
Catches it
Forestflame.
*catches a vole.*
Forestflame
OK cloverpaw. So you crouch down as low as you can. Then you sprring.
*catches a squirrel*
Now you try
~~Forestflame
*scents vole, crouches and stalks vole, and springs at it, misses it by a tail length*
Aww, I didn't catch it!
-Cloverpaw
*stalks mouse*
[gets with one quick blow]
Nice catch Shinepaw!-treepaw
*treepaw catches fish with a swift blow*
Great treepaw!Come on we have a clan to feed!-Shinepaw
(they catch 3 fish 2 voles and 2mice0
shinepaw,treepaw
*treepaw kills a mouse with one quick blow*
Nice catch!-shinepaw
Thanks.Why don't you sta..-treepaw
Shh*shinepaw catches a fish*-shinepaw
s[sun starts to set]We should head back to camp.-treepaw
Good Idea.WE've caught plenty of prey.[3 fish,2 voles and a rabbit]-shinepaw
Well cloverpaw you were close! Now try again.
forestflame
Ok
*Scents mouse. Pounces and catches it*
Forsetflame, I caught it!
-Cloverpaw
*hunts near lake*
[sees fish in water]
*catches fish (riverclan style)*
*scents mouse pounces and catches. burys fish and mouse*
*stalks and catches squirrell.burys squiirell.*
[catchs another fish burys next to other prey]
*catches vole*
[digs up prey carries in mouth]
~shinepaw~
opps I mean Shinerain.
~Shinerain~
Cl-cloverpond.Are you here?
Shrewpaw
Yes. So to hunt, you have to keep low and not let your prey hear, scent or feel you. Stalk it as close as you can and then pounce. {stalks mouse and catches it with one blow.} like that. Now you give it a try.
-Cloverpond
O-okay Cloverpond.
[stalks a vole.vole hears him and runs away]Mouse-dung![hangs head in embarresment]
Shrewpaw
That's ok, Shrewpaw. That was really good for a first time. *purrs* Why don't you try again. So, what do you scent?
-Cloverpond
Ummm.A mouse.[starts to stalk mouse.Sees mouse.Waits a bit.pounces.catches the mouse]I caught it!My first catch!
Shrewpaw
That was very good, Shrewpaw. Your turning to be a fine hunter!
-Cloverpond
Let's head back to camp.
-Cloverpond
Thanks Cloverpond![picks up vole and heads back to camp]
Shrewpaw
{Follows Shrewpaw back to camp}
-Cloverpond
Spiritsky??
-Honeystream
I'm here.Sorry.
I gat stuck talking to Shrewpaw.He kept on telling me about his training and stuff!lol!
Spiritsky
got
Honeystream are you here?
Spiritsky
I'm here. Let's hunt
-Honeystream
Okay.[smells a squirrel,and a mouse]What do you want to get?The squirrel or the mouse Honeystream?
Spiritsky
Um. . . I'll get the mouse. {stalks mouse, then pounces}
-Honeystream
Okay[purrs]good job![sees squirrel run up tree.Jumps into tree and goes after it.Squirrel jumps into another tree.Spiritsky jumps]
Spiritsky
[jumps across the wide space in between the trees to get the squirrel.Spiritsky miss calculated the distance of the space,and landed hanging off of the branch.He was hanging really high up and about to fall off...]
Spiritsky
Skyspirit, careful!!! I can't catch you, but . . . umm . . . {gathers big pile of leaves to fall on, so he can have a soft landing}
-Honeystream
[It's Spiritsky.Lol!Looks down.]Honeystream you are so small.What am I supossed to do!?
Spiritsky
I piled a pile of leaves for you to fall in. You should have a soft landing. Hold on, I'll make it bigger. {runs aroung gathering leaves} Ok.
-Honeystream
{woops}
-Honeystream
Is that really safe?[starts to slip.Falls.Yowls.Wails.Lands just in the pile of leaves]Ow.I think I hurt me tail and foot.I'll see Hollyfern and Runningpaw.Thanks though Honeystream.If there wasn't that leaf pile I would be dead right now.[purrs]
Spiritsky
[Purrs]Come on.I think my paw will be fine if we catch some more prey.[scents vole.Pounces]See it]s fine.But my tail hurts.But nothing is bleeding so nothing can get infected!
Spiritsky
[Catches three mice,one squirrel and two voles]
Shrewpaw
Soaringheart catches 4 fish,and a vole.
Shrewpaw catches 1 fish ,2 birds and a mouse.
Okay.Let's bring these back then we will come back out again.Okay Shrewpaw?
Fine...
Okay.Now you catch some fish while I go into the forest.
Sure Soaringheart.Whatever you say...[Shrewpaw jumps into the lake and looks around.Sees a fish.Goes up for air and dives back under and gets fish.Kills it.Repeats this]
Okay.I'm back.What did you catch?Let's see.3 fish.and 2 voles.Good enough.Let's go drop this off,and come out one more time.I caught 3 voles,and 3 mice.
[smells a vole.Catches vole.Smells mouse.Catches mouse.Sees fish.Catches fish]Okay.I caught enough.Keep on hunting Honeystream.
Spiritsky
Soaringheart and Shrewpaw caught all together-
Birds-1
Fish-3
Mice-6
Voles-4
Squirrels-
Ok. {Sees squirrel and chases it, pounces on it and bites its neck}
-Honeystream
Should we head back now,or keep hunting for a bit?
Spiritsky
I think we should head badk. We've caught quite a bit of prey. {picks up mouse and squirrel}
-Honeystream
[Picks up prey]Okay.Let's go Homneystream.You did really well and thanks for saving me back there.[purrs]
Spiritsky
Well, I wouldn't want you to go to Starclan . . .or any other cat. And you did well too.
-Honeystream
Thanks[purrs again]
Spiritsky
O.K, hazelstep, let's hunt.-Grassheart
*pounces upward, claws a unknown object, and comes down with a squirrel*
(later, when they had both caught much prey...)
Hey, I'm going back now, O.K, hazelstep??? We caught a bunch and I am kind of tired. But you canb keep hunting if you want.-Grassheart
*walks off with a squirrel, three voles, and a rabbit in his jaws*
*hunts and catches a fish, rabbit, and a sparrow.*
[walks into lake.Stays in for a long time.Goes back to camp]
Dreamstar
Are you here, Batwing???-Grassheart
I'm here.
Shrewpelt
I'm here too.
-Cloverpond
[smells vole.stalks vole catches vole.Buries it.Goes to lake.Jumps in.comes up with a huge fish]
Shrewpelt
Wow, your great at catching prey! {spots squirrel and catches it, then sees mouse and catches it, buries both squirrel and mouse}
-Cloverpond
Thanks.You're good too.I like getting fish the most though![dives back in and comes up with a fish.Stares at Cloverpond wide eyed.whispers]Slowly turn around.Don't make any sudden movements.Once you turn around keep you eyes on it and slowly back away and climb that tree right there.There is a whole bunch of...of...of huge dogs,I think Dreamstar called them wolves,behind you...
Shrewpelt
{Slowly turns around, sees wolves, and backs away to the tree, then scampers up it} Shrewpelt, what about you??
-Cloverpond
Try to get from tree to tree.[looks around]There are no trees around me.I will slowly back away and make my way to camp.You do the same but stay in the trees.[theres mewling from a kit.Ashkit walks out.The wolves turn their heads and see the kit and Shrewpelt]
Shrewpelt
*looks for ashkit then sees cloverpond in tree but shrewpelt on the ground sourrouned by wolves.*
Woah.
*grabs shrewpelt by the scruff and hurrys up a tree*
~Shinerain~
What about Ashkit??? He's still down there with the wolves! I can go get him, and try to dodge the wolves!!
-Cloverpond
I'll do It.I'm gray so I'll make myself look like a lost pup.
~Shinerain~
Shinerain!Don't!We need to get back to camp![and just saying again.Idon't think you could pull Shrewpelt up a tree.and he was not surrounded.They just looked his way]
Shrewpelt
They won't believe you're a lost pup!You're way too small!
Shrewpelt
[looks closer]I think Ashkit has hi eyes open!
Shrewpelt
[well whuteves hes in a tree thats all that matters]
Shrewpelt jump from tree to tree and get to camp and fetch some warriors.I'll see if I can get ashkit.
~Shinerain~
Okay.[starts jumping and being really careful.When he gets far enough away he jumps to the ground and starts running]I'm not a squirrel!
Shrewpelt
What do you want me to do, Shinerain??
-Cloverpond
*climbs down carefulley then sprints and grabs ashkit by the scruff and climbs back up the tree*
~Shinerain~
[the wolves run after Shinerain and grab one hair off of her tail.]
I get you pack!
Says muffeled:When i fet up fou take fashkit so I can full my self up.
~Shinerain~
Shinerain, are you ok??
-Cloverpond
Ok. {Takes Ashkit}
-Cloverpond
[barks]
Come down!I kill you cat!
Do wolves speak our language?
-Cloverpond
ya right
*passes ashkit to cloverpond*
* claws wolf with back paws wolf lets goes and yowls quickley pulls herself up*
Told ya so!
~Shinerain~
I do cat!Come down!I not hurt you!
Good question!
*yowls*
Shrewpelt stay back!Don't come!For some weird reason they want me!
~Shinerain~
[trys to jump into tree]
You rabbit-dirt!Come help me![some other wolves come and help hi m into the tree]
You just said I kill you cat!
~Shinerain~
I not want you!I want you and pack!
[he is face to face with Ashkit,Cloverpond and Shinerain]
Can I put Ashkit down on a branch?
-Cloverpond
you mean clan?
~Shinerain~
{gulps, whispers slowly} What do we do know?
-Cloverpond
Pack!Come here!I not hurt you!YET![snaps at the three cats and is inches away from there noses]
A strong one though we don't want him falling.
~Shinerain~
At least let me have young one there!
Well, don't we?
-Cloverpond
Peace wolf peace.Lets talk first.
Why do you want this so called "pack"?
~Shinerain~
[Ashkit starts mewling as the wolves muzzle is inches away from his face.Ashkit backs up and starts to slip]
I will never give you Ashkit!
-Cloverpond
You're pack!You're pack!
*grabs ashkit fast*
~Shinerain~
{catches Ashkit by the scruff and pulls him back up}
-Cloverpond
But he so scrawny!
{nevermind}
-Cloverpond
WE are not this so called "pack" we are clan members.
~Shinerain~
[Steps onto the branch Shinerain,Cloverpond and Ashkit are on.The branch starts to break and the wolf backs up just in time as the branch snaps and the cats fall to the ground]
[jumps down from tree]
Oww! That tricky fox-dung wolf. Are you cats ok?
-Cloverpond
The pack surround the cats
Lets go!Toward the lake!I don't think the can swim!
*Sprints toward lake*
I want pack you in!Pack!Clan!What we call it is not what you call it
[follows and runs in front of the cats and the pack surround them]
Oh nvm!
SHREWPELT COME WITH LIKE 3 OTHER CLANS!GET FLOWERCLAN,STORMCLAN AND DAWNCLAN!
~Shinerain~
[Shrewpelt was not there.he went back to warn the clan]
You want us to join?Or eat us?
~Shinerain~
[it was in caps i was yelling]
Can't we just claw their eyes out and jump in the lake?
-Cloverpond
[let's out a howl of laughter]I want you pack!We need to live!
You think not swim?
Um Cloverpond I have a kit in mouth thank you very much.
~Shinerain~
You think we not swim!
I think we can swim faster.
-Cloverpond
Opps, sorry, Shinerain.
-Cloverpond
Come pack!Let's show them our size![a lot more wolves emerge out of the shadows]
We were born to swim!
{whispering} What do we do?
-Cloverpond
Oh they want to eat us.
Well exscuse me I'm not a know it all.I know alot of things but not it all.*mutters*stupid peice of foxdung!
~Shinerain~
I have what you should do!Let us kill you!
Why would we let you eat us?
-Cloverpond
[howls]It is more fun when you run!The hunt is on!
[snaps at there faces]
*whispers*Yowl?and pray and yowl and prey with an e.*grins*
~Shinerain~
Ashkit starts mewling and starts to squirm]
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