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Friday, June 12, 2009

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Death Listener


Description-

Clan-MoonClan

Leader-None

Deputy-None

Medicine Cat-Moonlily-black she-cat with hazel eyes and white ears

Warriors-

Wolfsong-black tom with black eyes and gray streaks
Soarwing-gray tom with amber eyes and white paws
Cloudpelt-fluffy white she-cat with blue eyes and black stripes
Sparrowbranch-brown tom with amber eyes and white spots
Shrewstone-brown tom with green eyes and black/white stripes
Riverclaw-blue/gray she-cat with gray eyes and black paws
Dawnheart-river-gray she-cat with blue eyes and lighter gray stripes
Heathersky-heather brown she-cat with heather eyes and is mate with Stonefang
Stonefang-stone gray tom with gray eyes and is mates with Heathersky
Rosepetal-cream she-cat with yellow eyes and white stripes

Apprentices-
Nightpaw-black tom with green eyes and tip of tail white
Skypaw-blue/gray she-cat with blue eyes and black stripes
Tawnypaw-tawny tom with gold eyes and brown ears
Blackpaw-brown tom with amber eyes and white stripes,black tail
Thrushpaw-beige tom with heather eyes and fur tips black

StarClan-
Reedkit(Reedpond)-gray tom with blue eyes and black tail
Mosskit(Mosscloud)-heather tom with green eyes and brown spots
Runningkit(Runningbrook)-blue/gray she-cat with gray eyes and gray spots
Featherkit(Featherwing)-feathery black she-cat with green eyes and white specks
Rainwater-blue/gray she-cat with blue eyes and darker blue/grey stripes

Died-
Littlepaw-white she-cat with gold eyes and black ears
Flowernight-tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes and black streaks
Rainash-blue/gray tom with gray eyes and black streaks
Soottail-gray/white tom with blue eyes and dark tail
Smokestorm-smoke gray tom with yellow eyes and fire ash melted to fur
Sunkit-cream she-cat with cream eyes and mother was Heathersky
Wingstar-feathery gray tom-cat with blue eyes and white streaks
Leafriver-tortoiseshell tom-cat with green eyes and black paws

Other-

Nightpack

Leader-Silver-big silver male with coal black eyes,and bright silver neck fur(mane)

Members-

Fang-brown/white male with white feet and one white stripe down the back
Cloud-white male with brown streaks through fur
Claw-black male with one paw white
Storm-pretty gray female with black blurs in fur
Blackness-pure black male,everything is black on him
Light-white female with brown paws,and tail



Prologue

Wolfkit's ears were ringing with pain.He did not know why.He heard something.Something that was terrifying.He woke his mother,Rainwater.

"Mommy!We have to go!Please we have to go!"

"Calm down Wolfkit.Did you have a bad dream.Don't worry.All is fine now."

"No I did not have a bad dream!Please!Something bad is going to happen!Please we have to leave the camp!"

"Shhhhh.Don't worry.Tomorrow you will be able to leave,when you become an apprentice.But right now it is dark,and you are still a kit.Be quiet,or you will wake up Reedkit,Mosskit,Runningkit,and Featherkit."

"But Mommy!We have to leave!Please!I am so scared!Please!The noise!The noise is scary!"

"Mommy?What is wrong with Wolfkit?"

"Reedkit go back to sleep.Wolfkit just had a bad dream that's all.Don't worry I have it under control."

"Okay.[What's wrong with Wolfkit?Ya.Ya.Ya.]"

"Mosskit,Runningkit,Featherkit,and Reedkit.Please go back to sleep."

"Please Mommy!We have to leave now!The noise is louder then before!Please!Please![Wailing]
Please just listen!The noise is so loud!I can barely hear!"

"Wolfkit!You are going to wake the whole camp!Now just go back to sl-[Just then a huge wolf crashes into the nursery,and grabs Rainwater]

"MOMMY![Then it grabs Reedkit,Mosskit,Runnngkit,and Featherkit]NOOOOOO!MOSSKIT!REEDKIT!RUNNINGKIT!FEATHERKIT!WHY!!!![Then the wolf thrusts its muzzle at Wolfkit.Wolfkit is cowering on the ground as the big wolf sniffs him,then leaves.Wolfkit's mother,and brothers and sisters have joined StarClan in a cruel way]PLEASE DON'T LEAVE ME!!!!

Chapter One-Running

Wolfsong!Wolfsong!Wolfsong!

Wolfsong has just received his warrior name.Right at that moment he hears the ringing he has heard countless times before.Each time he could do nothing but watch as another cat of his clan was killed.The same way his family was killed.The ringing was the sound of death.Wolfsong was a Death Listener.He could hear death before a cat died.The ringing is loudest when the wolf pack comes.That's when he can clearly hear the sound of death.Wolfsong now knows that no matter how hard he tried,he could not save any cats lives,if the ringing started.He runs out of camp,when his clan were still chanting his warrior name.He did not want to see another death of one of his beloved clanmates.He ran blindly through the forest.Not caring if he ran into other clans territory's.He just wanted to escape the sound of death.He ran for a long time.He stopped when the ringing stopped.But then he heard something else.It sounded like a huge animal crashing through the forest.He quickly turned around,ready to run.But when he turned,he regretted it.He came face to face with a huge silvery wolf.He wanted to run,but couldn't.Those black eyes held him in place.He did not want to look at this wolves face for the second time in his life.His muzzle had fresh blood on it,just like last time.

"We meet again,Death Listener..."


Chapter 2-Finding

"Leave!"Wolfsong says finally breaking away from the big wolves stare.

"Why would we do that?This forest is very rich in prey."

"Why!Why are you killing my clan!"

"I am only feeding myself and my pack.Is that not what you do when you kill a mouse,who might or might not have a family of it's own?I am only trying to stay alive."

"Who are you?"

"Well Wolfsong I am Silver.The leader of Nightpack.This is Fang,Cloud,Claw,Storm,Light and Blackness.We have come to this forest when some of our pack members were killed by Death's.[Humans or Two-legs]I would go back to your home.Before I change my mind about never killing you.Leave!"Silver snarls fiercely.

Wolfsong starts running back to his clan.To see who Silver killed this time.When he came to the camp,he did not believe what he saw.Wingstar was on the ground.Obviously losing lives by the second.Wolfsong continued to look around.He saw Heathersky wailing her loss for her last kit alive,Sunkit.Sunkit was going to become an apprentice in half a moon.Then Wolfsong focused his gaze on Smokestorm.His body was crushed.Wolfsong walked up to Smokestorm,one of his closest friends.He saw blood behind Smokestorm.Wolfsong believed that Smokestorm was crushed trying to save Littlepaw.His son.Littlepaw was the only apprentice not there in the clearing alive.Wolfsong also noticed that Flowernight,Soottail and Rainash were not in the clearing.All prey for Nightpack.Then when Wolfsong looked over at Wingstar again,he saw Wingstar jerk once then lay still.He did not move again.Leafriver will be going to riceive his nine lives now.Nightpack went to far this time.Too many cats were dead.Then Wolfsong remembered that one of the pack members looked and smelled weird.Wolfsong was pretty sure it was Light.Then he smelled that same scent behind him.There was Rosepetal standing with her paw raised to attack.She had white foam coming out of her mouth.She also had a crazed look in her eye.She started to bring her paw down on Wolfsong.

"Rosepetal!ST-"

Chapter Three-Worry

Just before Rosepetal could strike Wolfsong,Riverclaw slammed into Rosepetal.Killing her instantly.

"I am sorry StarClan.I had what I had to do.To save a clanmate that would live."Riverclaw hangs his head in shame.

"Th-thank-you Riverclaw.You saved my life."

"No problem.What about Wingstar?We need to bury him.And Wolfsong.Where were you.No one saw you in the camp when the wolves came.Are you a traitor?"Riverclaw asked acussingly.

"I am not a traitor!I ran.I ran because I could not see another cat die.When i know that i can't do anything."Wolfsong whispers.

"Let's go bury Wingstar,and Smokestorm."

"What about Rosepetal?"

"No cat can touch her.We will get some sticks on the way.The river is just right here.We will wash her then bury her.But then cats can not drink out of the river for a few sun-rises."

Wolfsong goes and picks up Wingstar,while Riverclaw picks up Smokestorm.They carry them to the center of the camp,to be honoured.Leafriver gives Wingstar one last lick on the shoulder before he lieaves to receive his nine lives.

That night the clan sleeps beside Wingstar and Smokestorm.Some cats lie by Rosepetal.Moonlily warned them to not go to close to Rosepetal.

The next day the clan waits for Leafriver/star to come back.During the night Wolfsong heard faint ringing.He knows that the wolf pack was hunting.But farther away.The clan believes that Leafriver/star is probably just late.They wait all day long.Then the moon rises and the clan starts to worry.What will they do without a leader or deputy.Then they hear a yowl from Stonefang.He went to look for Leafriver/star.He comes running into camp out of breath.But manages to say four words that could change everything.

"Leaf...blood...hopeless...lives..."

Chapter Four Coming Soon!





11 comments:

enjoy the silence said...

i love this story...(mostly the wolf and wolfkit,mostly because i like wolves!)

Anonymous said...

I really like this story. I always try to write stories, but they come out bad.
-Cloverkit/Honeypaw

☪Dream said...

Thanks.I love writing stories.I have written a 6 page story before.It took me 2 and a half years to finish.I have started to write another story,like a year and a half ago.I only have one chapter done.LoL.


Dreamstar

Anonymous said...

I've done a lot of stories, but none of them were ever finished. lol.
-Cloverkit/Honeypaw

Anonymous said...

Ive tried, but never about wartiors, Dreamstar. Good job!!!

Foxspirit adn Grassheart

Anonymous said...

oops, I meant warriors

☪Dream said...

Those two other storys are not about warriors though.This is my first one!

Foxspirit and Grassheart said...

Well great job!!! by the way, you've inspired me! I am now on the 1st chapter of Foxspirit's life story.

☪Dream said...

Great!

Anonymous said...

I love this story!! It's gunna be my favourite when it's finished!
~Brambleheart

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

I love the death listener. When will chapter seven come out?