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Tuesday, November 9, 2010

The Need to Give Effort(BlackClan POV)-Part 3

1 Moon Later

Sunnyblade lay in the Nursery, her belly bulging with kits. Sun shone through a crack in the den, warming her in the chilly Leaf-Fall air. Life as a queen wasn't as bad as she expected, at least not yet. But she had two toms looking after her. One she loved with all her heart, the other of who, she respected as a clan-mate. Fierystar also seemed pleased with her progress. Her kits were due anytime, and Fierystar was anxious to make his clan larger and stronger.

By how large Sunnyblade was, Windingflame had guessed that she would have about five kits. She was actually, partially, looking forward to her kits. She adored kits and wanted to protect them at all costs. Now, she could protect her own kits, so she was content where she currently was. Though she detested BlackClan all together.

Sunnyblade jerked, and she looked around. She felt her body convulse, and she winced. One of the queens looked at her, then went to get Windingflame. Though Sunnyblade knew she wouldn't need him. She concentrated on one image in her mind. And before she had known what had happened, her kits were all born. Windingflame had come in some time, and was licking them all clean.

Sunnyblade smiled warmly at her kits. Five, healthy, beautiful kits that look exactly like me an Ragge- No... these kits look nothing like Raggedflame... they look like... Sunnyblade gulped, and curled her tail around the five kits. Erol.... She studied the kits, and she knew she was right. Some of them has the same build as Erol. What will Fierystar do!? She didn't need to wonder no more, as she saw Fierystar pad into the den, his eyes bright.

Fierystar padded over to Sunnyblade, and his eyes soon turned dark. He snarled, and grabbed one of the kits, dropping it at his paws.

"What.... is this!?"

Fierystar growled. Sunnyblade shook slightly.

"M-my kit."

Fierystar growled silently at her.

"Don't act smart! Who's kits are these!?"

Sunnyblade looked away.

"I know you know."

Fierystar smirked.

"Yes, but I want to hear it from you. Or I'll kill this kit."

Her eyes widened, and she gasped.

"E-e-erol's!"

Fierystar smirked, and pressed his paw into the kit's neck, cutting off it's airways. Sunnyblade watched in horror as the kit squirmed and cried silently, gasped for air. It was only moments from dying, when Fierystar unsheathed his claws, penetrating the kit's neck. Sunnyblade wailed softly, wrapping her body around her four other kit's. She weeped.

"Please stop! I never knew this would happen! I never wanted them to be Erol's!"

Fierystar snarled, and towered over Sunnyblade.

"Yes you did! But you were told to have RAGGEDFLAME'S!"

Fierystar smirked.

"I remember this scene. I just need to replace you with Dreamstar, from when I killed her."

Sunnyblade shook fiercely and yowled as Fierystar yanked another kit away from her.

"Now. You shall have Raggedflame's kits. Instead of these weaklings!"

He picked the newborn kit up, and threw it across the den. The kit hit the wall with a snap, and fell to the floor, mewling in pain. Sunnyblade closed her eyes, as she knew the kits back had been broken. Fierystar padded over to the kit, and bit it's neck, letting it die slowly. Fierystar's eyes were filled with pure rage.

"Now. I can give these kits a slow, or fast death. Fast if you hand them over to my willingly. Slow, if you resist."

Sunnyblade held the the three remaining kits firmly, not wanting to see them die.

::---::

Erol turned to Raggedflame.

"What is he doing in there!?"

Raggedflame bowed his head.

"K-killing them... they were your kits. Not mine."

Erol backed away, shaking his head.

"We need to stop him!"

Raggedflame sighed.

"The only thing we can do is maybe save one kit. I'll create a diversion. Be right back."

Raggedflame padded away, and soon came back with an apprentice.

"This is Ivypaw. She'll help. Ivypaw, Erol and I are going to distract Fierystar. While he's distracted, take one of Sunnyblade's kits and take it to LakeClan. Then come right back. But don't go in until I give a sign."

Ivypaw nodded, and Raggedflame and Erol walked into the den right as Fierystar threw a kit into the floor, breaking it's back. He pushed the kit aside, letting it die slowly and painfully. Erol watched horrified, and in his anger and sorrow, he leaped at Fierystar.

::---::

Sunnyblade yowled in grief as her third kit was killed. Then, she saw Erol leap at Fierystar.

"No!"

Fierystar snarled, and flipped Erol around she Fierystar was on top. Fierystar swiped at Erol's head, with unsheathed claws, making long cuts. Erol growled and kicked out with his back feet, making a deep cut in Fierystar's underbelly. Fierystar was thrown off of Erol, but quickly leaped back up and dug his teeth into Erol's shoulder. Erol yowled, and ripped away from Fierystar, tearing away his own flesh. Erol winced, and his leg dropped under him. Fierystar took this chance, and rammed his shoulder into Erol's head. Erol slid across the ground and hit the Nursery wall with a deep thud, and he didn't get up. Fierystar looked satisfied, though further angered, and turned back to Sunnyblade. Her face was wet with tears.

"Please stop! Please!"

Fierystar bared his teeth, and took another of Sunnyblade's kits. He bit into the kit's neck and tore at it, ending it quickly. Sunnyblade licked her last kit comfortingly. She didn't want to open her eyes to see Erol hurt and the torn bodies of her kits. Then, Sunnyblade felt her last kit pulled away from her. There was a shriek of pain, and Sunnyblade buried her head in her paws, and heard Fierystar exit the den, his paws thudding loudly on the Nursery floor. Sunnyblade heard Erol groan, but didn't respond, and continued to mourn for her kits.


17 comments:

✠Ember✠ said...

Yellowstripe winced he couldn't stand this, he wanted to get out of this clan as fast as he could. He couldn't stand it anymore.... what was once his home, was just nothing, nothing to him. Where was Mossyclaw? His heart ached, he wanted to help Mossyclaw's family all he could but how? He closed his eyes and glared at Fireystar. He was cruel, ruthless, just mean. Why had he ever looked up to him?

~-~Yellowstripe~-~

(Omg Dream too evil :P lol jk.... kinda!!)

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

(that made saw look like playhouse disney :O)

Dreamstar(logged out) said...

*Sunnyblade opened her eyes and whimpered as she saw her five kits, all dead. She crawled on her belly to wear Erol still lay, his shoulder letting the life bleed out of him. She licked his shoulder softly, crying.*

Please don't die... please don't die.... I can't afford to lose you too.

*Erol opened his eyes slightly.*

I'm not planning on going anywhere. But it's going to be okay. We'll get out of here someday. I promise.

*Sunnyblade nodded, and buried her head into Erol's neck.*

:~~Sunnyblade, Erol:

☪Dream said...

(lol Del. xD )

☪Dream said...

(Breezeee.... Ivypaw never did anything. Erol attacked before Raggedflame could give a signal. And why did you kill Raggedflame...? He was my character, not yours. I played him. You really had no right to kill him. I still had a story-line planned out... :/)

Breeze said...

(oops sorry lol. god, im so......idk. i wasnt feeling well yesterday. sorry, anyways, dream. :(

☪Dream said...

(It's okay, just re-comment.)

✠Ember✠ said...

(hehe I wanna rp w/ u guys still, anyway I could play yellow in this story or do I just stay out of it?)

•◘Alice in Wonderland◘• said...

(OMG just reading this made me cry!)

❄❀Ɖαωиʏ❀❄ said...

Mossyclaw her a loud cry. Sunnyblade! she thought. She snarled at Silentstalker, and ran into camp straight into the nursery. Sunnyblade was there, curled around five lifeless bodies.

"Sunnyblade..." Mossyclaw gasped. She padded up behind her sister. "I'm so sorry... W-what happened?"

<>*Mossyclaw*<>

✠Ember✠ said...

Yellowstripe saw Mossyclaw go into the nursery to talk with Sunnyblade, he looked away, he wanted to talk to her, but she wouldn't want him there while she was mounring her sisters kits.

~-~Yellowstripe~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"My vision is clouded." Gazestripe growled to herself, sitting in the shadows of camp. "And Coal is missing. How?" her eyes, which should've been shining with anger and sadness, were blank, almost sightless.

>Gazestripe<

✠Ember✠ said...

Yellowstripe looked over at Darkeningpaw "Hey," he mewed

~-~Yellowstripe~-~

Nestflame blinked "Do you think... he went back into transparancy?"

~-~Nestflame~-~

♣Delaney/Dolor♣ said...

"Maybe." she growled.

>Gazestripe<

"Hi." Darkeningpaw said.

>Darkeningpaw<

Buzz Girl said...

(Oh...my...gravy...that was the sadest thing ever! But i=I give Dream Kudos...that was very well written...yikes...written too well...)

BuzzGirl
J 1:9

✠Ember✠ said...

Yellowstripe put his head between his paws "I want to ger out of her." he muttered

~-~Yellowstripe~-~

βяɛɛʓɛ said...

*Fierystar padded to the center of camp, his pelt bristling in fury.. HE turned his head in time to see Frigidpaw enter camp, his head and tail low. Fierystar's eyes narrowed and he beckoned the young tom over.*

Frigidpaw, where've you been?

*He wanted to Snarl right in his son's ears, but he forced himself, with great effort, to be calm. Frigidpaw didn't meet his eyes.*

Patrolling......i was marking the borders.....

*Fierystars eyes narrowed further and he thrust his nose into Frigidpaw's shoulder fur, inhaling the scent. He felt his claws slide out and he pulled away, baring his teeth.*

Oh, really!? Than why does your fur smell otherwise? Do you really think you can get away with lying?

*Fierystar stood over the small apprentice, who crouched as low as he could t the ground. He still didn't look at Fierystar. This angered him further.*

I......Er....Look, father-

*With a yowl of rage, Fierystar grabbed Frigidpaw's scruff and flung him over his head. The apprentice let out a hiss of surprise and landed heavily on one shoulder. He tried to prop himself up with that leg, but it wouldn't support him.*

How dare you think you can call me father. Especially when you've been Telling Markstar everything!

*the watching cats ears immediately went back in shock and anger.*

You are not my son. My son wouldn't be such a coward. My son wouldn't side with our greatest enemy!

*Fierystar sneered. HE smiled cruelly.*

Your punishment? Oh, there are many things i could do.

*he spoke softly suddenly, padding slowly towards Frigidpaw, who tried again to get up.*

But i think there is only one punishment that i could think of that would be suiting for you.

*he stood over the apprentice now, staring down at him coldly.*

Fierystar, please. Don't do this....i can work harder! i can-

*Fierystar snarled and raked his claws across Frigidpaw's head.*

You sound like Sunnyblade!

*Fierystar grabbed Frigidpaw's tail and threw him across the clearing. HE padded over again, and bit into Frigidpaw's neck. The apprentice squeezed his eyes shut, waiting for the end. But Fierystar let go right as Frigidpaw was about to give up. HE turned away and padded towards his den. As he walked, he threw a snarl over his shoulder.*

Leave. Go to LakeClan. Its what you want, isnt it? But at Sundown, im sending a patrol to kill you if you arent there.

*Fierystar glanced at the sky. It wasn't far from Sundown.*

I suggest you go now.

*Frigidpaw didnt hesitate. he scrambled up, wincing at the weight on his shoulder, and limped rapidly out of camp.*

~!fiery/Frigid!~