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Tuesday, November 30, 2010

The Need to Give Effort(BlackClan POV)-Part 5

Erol walked silently to Fierystar's den, and padded in. Fierystar was curled in his nest, sleeping soundly, though growls came occasionally. Is he... in the Dark Forest...? It doesn't matter, because soon he will be. Erol narrowed his eyes, then leaped back when Fierystar jerked awake, and looked around. Then suddenly,a shining light appeared, and a starry black and white apprentice appeared. A snarl ripped out of Fierystar's mouth.

"StarClan! Get out of my den!"

He leaped at she-cat, but his claws met thin air. Suddenly she was beside Erol. He stood with shock as the apprentice started to sing softly. Fierystar stood rigid too, though his lips were drawn back in a silent snarl.

"The angels are cryin' in StarClan tonight,
Their hearts are so heavy
They've got tears in their eyes,
The angels are crying in StarClan tonight,
Cause they can't understand why,
We can't find the light."

Erol stood speechless, as more starry forms started to appear. Then she said.

"They cry for all the lies,
We live with everyday,
And for all the kits,
Sleepin' in the rain,

For the noble dreams that somehow seem,
To always be in vain,
And for the gentle hearts who still believe,
In the miracle of faith.

The angels are cryin' in StarClan tonight,Their hearts are so heavy
They've got tears in their eyes,
The angels are crying in StarClan tonight,
Cause they can't understand why,
We can't find the light..."

Her voice stopped, and silence filled the den, though StarClan cats were everywhere. Then, Erol heard a voice in his mind. You will win Erol, because you have StarClan on your side. But a true warrior does not need to kill to win a battle, even for revenge. Erol blinked in understanding, and then Fierystar leaped forward, shattering the images of the StarClan cats. They were gone, and that only left Fierystar and Erol in the den. Fierystar was bristling with pure anger, and shot a glare at Erol.

"Why are you in here!?"

Erol gulped.

"I-I was going to ask...."

Erol glanced outside to notice that it was almost Dawn.

"...if you wanted to go on the Dawn Patrol. But I guess not. Sorry for bothering you."

Fierystar narrowed his eyes, but said nothing as Erol left the den. He looked to the sky and watched as the stars faded to light.

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Don't ask about the video. it was the best I could find. :S



14 comments:

βяɛɛʓɛ said...

Shadowsoul snarled at Fierystar.

"i havent even unsheathed my claws."

HE waved his paw in Fierystars face, grinning. Fierystar twisted and clouted Strikewinds ear with his paw.
Fierystar stood, staggering for a moment. He glared at both cats, hissing violently.

"All you've shown me, is defensive moves. What kind of warrior are you?"

Shadowsoul yawned.

"You bore me. But fine."

Wth a short hiss he raced for Fierystar, who leaped in the air with satisfaction as he looked down at the huge black cat. But Shadowsoul just fell back on his haunches and leaped up. crashing into Fierystar and raking his claws from Fierystars shoulder to behind his hind leg. Fierystar screeched.

TWistingbreak's eyes blazed. HE took a step forward, his eyes glistening.

"Oh yeah? Deputy's daughter, huh? Not as hard as being Leader's son!

☪Dream said...

*Sunnyblade bared her teeth.*

I never said it was!

:~~Sunnyblade:

*Strikewind rolled her eyes.*

Can you just not fight for a day?

:~~Strikewind:

βяɛɛʓɛ said...

Shadowsoul padded over to her and brushed her shoulder with his muzzle.

" Dunno. Depends on who we meet."

Fierystar blinked. No one had ever shrugged him off like a fly like that. HE heaved himself to his paws and glared at Shadowsoul and Strikewind.

"Who are you?"

HE Asked them suspitiously, with a trace of caution.


TWistedbreak looked away, his paws working furiously on the ground.

"Shut up. Just eat. The sooner you do the sooner i can get out of here."

Fury seeped from his eyes, and underneath a trace of frustration.

☪Dream said...

I don't want to eat. I'm not hungry.

*Sunnyblade narrowed her unusually cold eyes.*

:~~Sunnyblade:

*Strikewind rolled her eyes at Shadowsoul and looked at Fierystar.*

Who are you?

:~~Strikewind:

βяɛɛʓɛ said...

Fierystar rolled his eyes.

"I already told you. And, if i recall, youre on my territory, so who are you?"



TWistedbreak's gaze softened.

Look, im sorry what happened. My father was a cruel heap of fox dung. But trust me-ill get revenge. For you, for me, And for Frigidpaw...."

His vice trailed off, and his eyes were distant as his claws dug deep into the moss.

☪Dream said...

*Erol narrowed his eyes.*

No one is getting revenge.

*Except me...*

:~~Erol:

*Strikewind rolled her eyes.*

This territory is a dump.

:~~Strikewind:

βяɛɛʓɛ said...

TWistedbreak hissed at Erol.

"Fierystar will die. I dont care who does it. I hate him. we are Nothing alike. id be insulted to be his mother!



Fierystar growled threateningly.

"Whatever. You both will come with me to my camp. Bring them!"

He called loudly as several cats padded out of the bushes, faces stone cold and grim. Shadowsoul rolled his eyes and meowed loudly,

"Really? Like seven warriors is gonna stop us from escaping?

☪Dream said...

*Strikewind smirked at Shadowsoul, her claws unsheathed. She was itching for a fight. She needed to release her anger and sorrow. PineClan was destroyed, and with it, so was Darkshadow. Strikewind felt a twinge in her heart, but ignored it. She looked at Stonepaw and Quakepaw. They were bristling with fury, battle ready. While Shadedpaw, Mistedpaw, Surgepaw and Eveningpaw looked around scared, but their fur bristling.*

:~~Strikewind:

*Erol bared his teeth.*

I. Don't. Care.

:~~Erol:

βяɛɛʓɛ said...

Shadowsoul smirled and unsheathed his claws.


Twistingbreak looked away.

"Really? IF you didn't care, you wouldn't say you didn't care. I know. You hate Fierystar as much as we all do and you're planning something."

☪Dream said...

*Erol spat*

I'm planning nothing!

:~~Erol:

*Strikewind lifted her head.*

We can leave whenever we want, with, or without your "warriors" here.

:~~Strikewind:

βяɛɛʓɛ said...

TWistingbreak leaned in, ignoring his last comment.

What is it? I want in!


Quakepaw's tail quivered as he fought the urge to leap into battle right away.

Fierystar snorted.

"Uh-huh. And as you fight my warriors, ill kill your kits"

HE smiled in a mock sweet way.

☪Dream said...

You do realize there are two of us?

*She flicked her tail at Shadowsoul.*

I'd like to see you take us on.

*Strikewind snarled.*

:~~Strikewind:

*Stonepaw gazed around with cold eyes, his body ready to attack.*

:~~Stonepaw:

There is nothing!

*Erol snarled, his tail lashing.*

:~~Erol:

✠Ember✠ said...

Yellowstripe looked around bordley feeling like an outcast. He padded out of camp, once in the forest he stayed very still listening for prey.

~-~Yellowstripe~-~

βяɛɛʓɛ said...

Twistingbreak sighed.

"Fine. But i hope you know that if you need help, i'll be here."

With a last glare at Sunnyblade and Erol, he padded out of the den and nearly bumped into a large, scarred black she-cat with cold yellow eyes. He recognized her as the outsider from oakclan or whatever it was. HE narrowed his eyes at her and curled back his lip.