Maybe?

*Dreamstar padded out of her den and leaped onto the LakeRock. She called the clan together. She saw Bluepaw eying her angrily, where he thought she was with sightless eyes. Dreamstar sighed. She also saw Foxfang and Cottonpelt nearby. They were shifting their weight around nervously, hoping their brother would be made a warrior also.*

I called you here today, because I have changed my mind. Bluepaw shall be made a warrior tonight, with Everpaw also...

I Dreamstar leader of LakeClan call upon my warroior ancestors to look down upon these apprentices. they have worked hard to learn the ways of the Warrior Code, and I give them to you as warriors in their turn.

Bluepaw, do you promise to withhold the Warrior Code and protect and defend your clan, ever at the cost of your own life?

*Bluepaw nodded a yes, and Dreamstar leaped down, and rested her chin on his head. She felt the cool feeling of his tongue, and she stepped away.*

Everpaw, do you promise to withhold the Warrior Code and protect and defend your clan, even at the cost of your own life?

*Everpaw nodded, her eyes shooting to Bluepaw. Dreamstar rested her chin on Everpaw's head, and felt Everpaw lick her shoulder. Dreamstar stepped back and lifted her head.*

Bluepaw, from this moment you shall be known as Bluegaze! StarClan honours or bravery, and skills.

*Dreamstar nodded, and continued, though she was shaking ferociously at making these two mysterious cats warriors.*

Everpaw, from this moment you shall be known as Everlight! StarClan honours your passion, and skills.

*Dreamstar nodded. The clan could see how badly shaken she was, and for the second time, chanted the warriors names nervously.*

Bluegaze! ... Everlight! ... Bluegaze! ... Everlight!

*Bluegaze sighed angrily. He looked to see that Everlight felt the same. This wasn't what was supposed to happen. Not this, not ever. Bluegaze shook his head, and let Everlight guide him to the center of camp.*