Dreamstar was sitting in the entrance of her den.Watching the kits play in the rain.Ignoring their mothers requests to get inside.Then Dreamstar heard a very loud roaring.Dreamstar laid her ears flat against her head.This didn't sound like thunder.The sound got closer and closer.Dreamstar looked over to the mountains,the same time her clan did.Then,the clan started to yowl.There was this huge spiral coming straight for the camp.The sound was unbearable.Dreamstar then made up her mind.
"RUN! GO! HEAD OUT OF THE CAMP! GET THE KITS! QUEENS,APPRENTICES AND ELDERS ARE TO BE SURROUNDED BY THE WARRIORS! NOW!"
Dreamstar yowled at the top of her lungs. Some wariors quickly darted into the nursery and grabbed some kits. The queens were rushed out the camp. And into the middle of all the wariors. The apprentices then rushed out too. The elders were the last to leave. The spiral was so close that Dreamstar could feel the powerful winds coming off of it. Dreamstar was the last to leave. She could barely see where she was going. The spiral was tearing tree out of the ground. Sending debris everywhere. Dreamstar also couldn't hear. She stopped when she saw Hazelstep trying to get Freezecloud to stand up and keep moving.
"HURRY UP FREEZECLOUD! WE HAVE TO KEEP MOVING!"
Dreamstar tried her best to yowl over the wind.She looked ahead and saw that her clan were waiting.
"GO! KEEP MOVING! WE'LL BE FINE!"
She flicked her tail. Signaling in case they hadn't heard her. Then Freezecloud looked up.
"PLEASE! JUST GO! LEAVE ME! PLEASE!"
Dreamstar nodded. She kept walking. Hazelstep followed reluctantly. Then hard white pellets started to fall. The cats yowled. Then the wind picked up and dreamstar turned around to see Freezecloud yowl then be swept away into the spiral.
"FREEZECLOUD!"
Hazelstep tugged on Dreamstar's pelt. Dreamstar hund her head,then ran forward.She didn't know where they would go. What they wpuld do. The spiral was still there. Following them.She yowled again.
"RUN! RUN LIKE YOU'VE NEVER RUN BEFORE! QUICKLY! JUST RUN!"
Dreamstar then started to run. She ran to the front of the group. Then turned towards StormClan. She started to run in that direction,with her clan following,hoping that the deadly spiral would not follow.
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Dreamstar yowled over the deafining roar of the spiral. She didn't want to look back. Dreamstar was blinded by rain and white pellets. And the debris. A tree had already smashed into Birdwing's side. Leaving the clan cautious and terrified. The spiral had taken two lives.How many more.
So this is a tornado, right? Well anwywayz, (gazestripe picked up lightningkit by the scruf and ran with all the other cats. Terrified ad she was, something sharp hit her ear, sending a jolt of pshe ain through her body, causing her to drop the kit)
REOWWW! (tawnyheart come over to her) i'll take the kit. (she snatches up the kit and runs away) (Gazestripe, who is unaware of the condition of her ear, follows behind)
[yes it's a tornado.LOL.But they don't know that.So spiral will do!]
[Cats started to yowl again as they looked behind them and saw trees spinning in the spiral]
"DON'T PANIC! JUST HEAD TO STORMCLAN! WAIT! RUN TO THE LAKE AND JUMP IN THE WATER! THE KITS... THERE'S A SMALL CAV- NO! JUST...BRING THE KITS IN THE WATER TOO!BUT STAY IN THE SHALLOW PART IF YOU HAVE KITS!MAKE SURE THE KITS CAN BREATH!
Dreamstar
(gazestripe jump in the water, and notices that the water clouds red around her)
[Adder looked back and saw Sundapple struggling to carry Mintkit.Sundaple was also slower then the rest because she is expecting kits.Adder saw the spiral getting closer and closer to Sundapple.Adder ran back to Sundapple and told her to run.She listened and ran.Adder struggled to pick up Mintkit because he was squirming so much.Then he finally got a hold of Mintkit.But then he heard the roar of the spiral right behind him.The wind ripped at his pelt.He yowled through the mouthful of fur.he started to run but was being sucked back by the wind.He ran with all of his might.He opened his eyes to see his clan running into the lake.they were all safe.He had to keep moving.he would not drop this kit.He slammed his paws to the earth and sprang forward.He was free from the force.But it was still right behind him.he ran to the lake and jumped in.Then Dreamstar gave the signal to dive.All of the cats dived except for the cats with kits]
Adder
(gazestripe dives under, but the pain in her ear increased.) Reowwwww(bubbles spread from her mouth, and now she was unable to breath)
Adder looked around.Every once in a while the cats would come out for air,then go back down.The spiral was coming closer,and all Adder could do was lay flat on his belly,and making sure that Mintkit could breath.
Adder
(tawnyheart was starting to panick, she was holding Lightningkit up as high as she could, but the water started getting deeper and deeper, and she wondered how they can survive)
(Wasppaw, noticing Gazestripe, was rushing to her) C'mon get up! you gotta get up!
(p.s. Swiftstar went to the water park so she said to play her characters)
Adder felt larger and larger waves slam against him as the spiral came closer.He held his head up.Trying to make sure that Mintkit was okay.
Adder
(gazestripe kept flailing trying to get heer head to the surface to breate)
You have to keep going, Gazestripe! Don't give up! -Wasppaw
Grayshadow came up for air and gasped when she saw Adder cowering under the spiral.But then he quickly died as the spiral went over him.But he was soon sucked up to the surface.Mintkit was sputtering and coughing.Cats started to yowl as Dreamstar realized that the force of the spiral would just suck them up to the surface.Then Dreamstar yowled.
"DIVE AS DEEP AND AS LONG AS YOU CAN!DON'T COME UP UNLESS YOU REALLY NEED AIR1TAKE A DEEP BREATH AND GO!"
Dreamstar dived under.Grayshadow could see her going deeper.Then Grayshadow followed her.
(Gazestripe tryied to dive down as deep as she could, but kept struggling, knowing she couldn't make it)
(She felt teeth grasp her scruf, and realized it was Gazepaw)
(but it didn't help, the weight of gazestrrip stared pulling her under)
-Gazestripe
Mistkit! Nightkit! Follow me! *the kits star stumbling after Willowmoon, but Nightkit lags behind, and a big branch fall on him* NIGHTKIT!!! Mistkit, stay there. *picks up the badly wounded Nightkit, with Mistkit in tow, the family runs out of the camp*
Is Nightkit okay?
Grayshadow
Okay. Swim into the lake. Swimming is just like walking, only in water. Now dive. Hold your breath. And swim. *Mistkit dives, followed closly by Willowmoon. Nghtkit must have been listening, because, although he couldn't move his back legs, he held his breath and swam with his front legs. All of them had their eyes open, and they came up for air as was needed. Suddenly, they heard Dreamstar's yowl. DIVE! AS DEEP AS YOU CAN! *WIllowmoon, Mistkit, and Nightkit sink to the bottom, and wait* THe spiral passed over with out a sound, and Mistkit quickly swam to the surface for air. MISTKIT!! NO!!! But it was too late. Mistkit was sucked up into the vortex, but she thought it was fun. Then she slammed into something and fell crashing into the water as an apparently lifeless heap. Oh Mistkit....
(gazestripe heres willowmoon's call with her remaining ear, but barely has the strength to go on.) Arghhhh (satrt leaning on Wasppaw's shoulder)
(Tawnyheart's bones starts to grow weary, and she was very exasted) Tawnyheart....... you can find the strength to carry on... keep lightningkit safe.....
Sharpheart?!? I must keep going! (she starts trudging along, at a faster pace now)
Yes, but his back is broken, so he can't move his back legs. Mistkit, wake up! *Starts licking Mistkit furiously*
Well, if his back is broken he can't still be alive. Are you sure iut isn't just his back leg that are broken?
Oh! *runs over to help Gazestripe* Come here. *leads Gazestripe back into the sheltered aclove where she kept Mistkit and Nightkit* I have some knowledge of herbs... *applies a poultice to Gazestripe's ear, causing her to wince at the herbs' sting, but it feels better soon* Okay. Rest. Nightkit, Mistkit.... *wails*
His back is broken, but not that bad. It hurts, but his back legs are paralyzed. It'll heal.
(blinks in graditude)
Thank you Willowmoon....... thank you.....
*licks Mistkit, and she starts to cough feebly* Oh Mistkit....*licks her, adn discoveres she has a broken front paw* We'll patch that up... *nightkit starts wailing, and he is too weak to go on. His last sight is of his mother staring at him, her eyes full if grief and loss* Oh Nightkit... he's dead. *lowers head*
Then as the spiral passed over head,Dreamstar heard another roar.She looked around and saw a HUGE WAVE.Dreamstar let out a shriek.
"GET OUT OF THE WATER!NOW!THE WATER ISN'T SAFE!
But then she also heard another roar.She saw another HUGE spiral coming in the oppisite direction of the wave.She looked around frantically.There was no where that was safe...
You're welcome. You've lost hearing in one ear, but a little hearing remains. You can hear voices through your injured ear. *Grooms Gazestripe, then turns to Nightkit* He's dead. I'll bury him here. *Digs hole, and places Nightkit in it, then covers it up and places a flower petal on it* Nightkit.... *wails again*
[Gotta go! :(]
Grayshadow yowls.
"RUN! RUN!"
Then Dreamstar turns on Grayshdow.
"Doing that won't help."
EVERYONE GET OUT OF THE WATER NOW!
There was a deafning roar from the wave and the other spiral.
[no, not really :)]
At least I have Mistkit. *Mistkit wails feebly, then closes her eyes. It becomes apparent that she's fallen asleep* *Purrs* Silly Mistkit. I forgot it was time for your nap.
*Looks up* oh no... *a big wave rears up in front of the sheltered cove, the comes crashing down* NO!!!! *grabs Mistkit* My kit... *starts swimming strongly towrds the nearest bank, which is 900 tail-lengths away*
*Hauls self onto the bank, and flops down, exausted. Licks Mistkit, who startes to mew. Looks over accross the mass of water, prepared to help*
Wasppaw, now now relieved of Gazestripe's weight, tries to get up to the surface but a big wave crashes down of him, and everything goes black)
(Gazepaw, who escaped the big wave, looked around for Wasppaw. Then she noticed him lying motionless, on the floor of the cave that Willowmoon, and the kits who died were and ran over to him)
Wasppaw! Wasppaw wake up! Who did this to him?
(wasppaw woke up in a greenleaf forest, wondering where he was, he padded up to see a kit huddleing near a tree stump, and recognized it waz Nightkit.) nightkit! What are you doing here? Do you know where we are?
Wasppaw wake up! (Then she notices Gazestripe sitting there, and notices her ear) What happened?!?!
Y-yes. You're in Starclan. You're dead. I'm dead too. I died of a broken back when a branch fell on me. Mistkit is still alive, and so is Mama. I can't go back. But you can.
? (not really lol)
:) Yes, Wasppaw. You can go back to the world of the living, or come with me to Starclan. Which do you choose?
(???? ummmm NOT REALLY)
-swiftstar and gazestripe
I MEAN THAT HE CAN COME BACK KTO LIFE IF HE WANTS!!!!! Sheesh...
[Cinderpelt came back to life!]
Adder cringed as the huge wave was over his head[it's really a snumi or however you spell! it!]
The wave slammed down on him.Adder struggled to swim back up.Mintkit was barely breathing.When adder finally got back up to the surface,he was in the middle of the lake.In every direction it would take a long time to swim back.
I'm sorry, but I know I can't go back. It's to late.
-Wasppaw
(a cat apprears, and wasppaw remembers him)
Follow me, young one.
O.k......Sharpheart. (follows sharpheart away is the forest, head and tail down) meet you later.
-Wasppaw
*Looks out across the lake, and sees a small figure holding a kit* I better go help that cat! Mistkit, if you get washed away, you know what to do. Wait for me,and don't move. *Swims out to the swimming cat*
Adder! Let me take Mintkit. Follow me. *Swims back to the hidden bank and Mistkit, with Adder folowing*
Wasppaw, is dead, along with nightkit.
-Gazestripe
I know, I know. I wonder, if he is watching over us. (hears loud roar in the distance)
I am..... help your clan mates
O.k. Wasppaw, o.k....
(Rushes over to Adder)
Do you need help?
Apparently. He's barly concious from exaustion, but he needs to eat these. *gives Adder some herbs, which boosts his strength* Are you okay? *looks down, and finds Mistkit is looking at Mintkit, and purrs*
(a lone cat appears in the distance and gazes at Dreamstar)
My name is Swiftheart. I am here. And I can help.
(P.s. you can tell who i am)
Ya.I'm fine.But where is every one else.Where's G-...nevermind...
Then there was a loud yowl as the next tornado came.The tornado came right over the roof of where they were staying.A whole bunch of rocks fell in front of the entrance.Sealing the cats in.
Adder
...
Who are you?
Dreamstar
(Gazestripe hears voices, all around her)
an hear the voices)
Yes, Starclan given you a gift...... We will always will wisper in your ear.
We're all going to die and I will never see G- [looks around.Eyes darting]life again!
Adder
*Gulps* we're trapped. But at least we have shelter from the wind and rain.... Oh no.... *starts lifting small rocks, one by one, until a vey small hole appears* I'm exausted... *pads over to join Gazestripe, Mistkit, Mintkit, and Adder*
*chuckles* you like Gazepaw, don't you?
What!What did you see!
Adder
No.I don't like Gazepaw.There.[gives him a serious look.]
Adder
gaze will be the key to the next peophecy....
(gazestripe hears starclan's words buffet her ear fur)
(p.s. I switched computers s i am not loged on)
I'm a she-cat.
How will get out of here.[Adder walks to the hole and looks out.He gasps.Outside of the sealed shelter,Hazelstep was lying lifeless]
Adder
i am her to help you.....
[her!]
[Swiftheart.Who do you play?]
Who are you!
Dreamstar
(p.s.s Gazestripe is not trapped)
[How.He was in there with them...]
I meant here!
duh!
HAZELSTEP! Heatherbreeze will be so sad.... *frantically digs, until a hole big enough for all the cats to slip through is formed* Mistkit! Mintkit! Come on! *Gets out of cave, and blinks at the bright light, before going over to Hazlestep* Such a waste... *grooms his fur*
[Grayshadow walked around nervously as the second tornado thundered closer.Then Grayshadow yowled as she was swept into the spiral.Grayshadow was flung out and landed n the water.Not far from shore]She saw that an entrance to a cave was covered with rocks.Abd she heard cats inside]
Grayshadow
Gotta go!
[Heatherbeeze is already dead!LOL]
(I escaped)
you will be help your brother, swiftheart
-Voices
my b-brother?
(swiftstar wanted that)
[Adder slipped through the hole and saw Grayshadow looking across the lake.He stiffled a purr]
What are we supposed to do.
Adder
Follow me! (trudges through the lake)
But why!The spiral is there!
dreamstar
[Who are you Swiftheart!]
No, I meant over here (only trudges toward a cliff that revels a tunnel0
But what if the tunnel colasspes?
dreamstar[WHO ARE YOU!]
It's made out of rock. Rubbs paw around the walls. It's takes a days travel, but it's safe. It will lead you to a new camp (temporary, if your camp is not completely destroyed)
But even rock will break away.And I don't know where every cat of my clan is.
Dreamstar
[Swiftheart.Please tell me who you play in my clan!]
It's leads to an underground world, with lakes, rivers, and trees. there is another tunnel there that is shorter and leads you outside. Quick! We don't have much time! (Four spirals start head toward dreamstar and her clan, and the waves get bigger) If you don't go, more of us will die!
I am Swiftstar..... swiftstar of briarclan......but starclan has called to me.
I don't trust it.When I was a kit,one of my clan members went into this tunnel,and never came out.I'm not going in it.
Because then,a few sunrises later.They found his body.Floating in the lake,lifeless.His pelt was torn apart and you could see his insides.
Dreamstar
they told me of the troble that has come to us, and in the loss of wasppaw, sharpheart and all others i would like to join your clan as swiftheart (Who is like sol, except isn't bad)
It's the only way! Unless you all want to die! I know what's in there... a creature.... but you got to trust me! We can beat it! (It's just like the tunnels in the books, cats still can make it through0
I know of this creature.... but it can only kill cats alone. Together, we can stop it!
No!There are other ways to live!I'm not going to get killed in the dark!And look around!Do you see any of my clan members!No!They are all scattered around.Some probably dead!I swore that I would protect my clan with all of my lives!I am not leaving them now!
Dreamstar
( the natural forces surge closer, and gazestripe hears starclan whisper in her ear again.....0
the tunnels......the tunnels.....
(gazepaw notices two shapes near a dark tunnel, and her heart soared) She looks at tawnyheart and calles to the scatered remains of the clan)
I think they found a way out! (some of the cats start running in that direction.
Have you found a way out?
-Tawnyheart
(asks dreamstar) (then stares at a black cat, unfamiliar) Who's that?
p.s.I'm on my computer and Gazestripe is on another
No[snarls]This cat is trying to send us to our death!
I don't trust it.When I was a kit,one of my clan members went into this tunnel,and never came out.I'm not going in it.
Because then,a few sunrises later.They found his body.Floating in the lake,lifeless.His pelt was torn apart and you could see his insides.
Fine! You wind a different way out! (All the cats are huddled near the claf, and the swirls and waves start to close in on them.) And I'm not trying to lead you to death!
What! Where can we go, then? And who is that, anyway?
Hey! i just noticed that there are now 87 comments on this post! Cool!
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Hi
Anywayz, let's get back to this big scene that you, me and gazestripe(who is secretly me too this whole time)! Let's carry on!
Ashpaw huddled close to Shadepaw, pressing into his black fur. She was trembling, and she knew it.
Shadepaw wasn't doing too well either. His eyes were hard, fixed on the arguing cats.
Ashpaw flattened her ears and pressed closer.
R u you wrighting a big comment, or just getting bored?
Huh?
Oh...
Umm....
Well I don't know what to write about!
Shadepaw had his eyes on the bickering cats, not entirely sure of what to do. He felt Ashpaw against him, shivering. He let a small purr escape his throat, then relaxed against her.
Should we drive em's out?
-Gazepaw
I don't think we should, he seems friendly...
-Tawnyheart
(Gazestripe hears the voices again)
Tell dreamstar to follow her heart.....
I will, I will
[Dreamstar looks around frantically.Not knowing what to do]
(lol i don't know if you belive what i said a few comments ago......)
Ashpaw was watching Adder. He wasn't too bad of a tom. She didn't love him, but he wasn't too bad. She stifled a purr.
Gazepaw looked around) What are we going to do?
[Dreamsar blacks out]
Hello Dreamstar.It's nice to see you again.
[dreamstar purred when she heard the familar voice]
"Lakestar.What's happening.Who is this cat.I don't want to go down those tunnels."
"Dreamstar.That cat is Swiftheart.Swiftheart is telling the truth.Follow Swiftheart.Or follow my voice."
[Lakestar faded and Dreamstar woke up.She heard Lakestar's voice in the tunnels.She sighed]
[Adder looked at Grayhadow.Then he turned his eyes and saw Ashpaw looking at him.He froze]
Adder
Taking a deep breath, Shadepaw stood. "What does Swiftheart want us to do?" He narrowed his green eyes at Swiftheart. (Swiftstar, I'm Pouncepaw)
Ashpaw stayed huddled to the ground, a heap of gray and white fur. She didn't know what to do, and she was scared. Yes, she admitted it. She was scared. She shuddered and took a deep breath.
(Dreamstar, will you switch out Ashpaw's pic? Could the current one be her warrior pic, and the one on the join page be the apprentice pic?)
( the voices come to gazestripe)
Swiftheart will guide you, dreamstar will follow her heart.......
Yes, she will, she will follow it
-gazestripe
[I'm sorry Ashpaw,but no.Because it kind of looks weird when a warrior has a kit picture.And can you please give me more of a specific picture for Ashpaw's warrior picture]
We should go to the tunnels! but, it's all up to Dreamstar (he glances at Dreamstar, who was lost in thought.)
(and yes, I meant HE)
-swiftheart
(Kit picture? Kit picture? I don't think it looks like a kit picture. Ashpaw is just really small) (PS: Sorry, I tend to make a big deal out of small things. Don't kick my tail out of LakeClan!)
[Dreamsar walks forward and sniffs into the tunnel.She could smell Lakestar.And she could here him]
Dreamstar
[It's still a picture of a kit.It would look out of place among other warrior pictures]
(Noticing her coming to a verdict, and then glances behind them. The swirls were only 100 foxlengths behind them closing in fast0
What is your choice?
[Do you like this picture as her warrior picture?-
http://www.warrenphotographic.co.uk/photography/cats/17288.jpg
-swiftheart
Go.I'll follow.But it's not you who I'm following.[Dreamstar gives Swifthart a suspiscous and stern look]
the tunnels the tunnels.....
(all of the voices of starclan crowd her head, until it comes out into one voice, the voice of lakestar) the tunnels!
-Gazestripe
[Dreamstar follows Swiftheart.She looks behind her and signals for Grayshadow to go look for the rest of the clan.She signals for Adder to go with her.Smiling as Adder raced away]
Dreamstar
[Ashpaw?Do you like that picture?]
(gives Dreamstar a knowing look back) O.k.....(Steps into the tunnel). Guided by our warrior ancestors, we will find our way through.
-Swiftheart
(steps into the cold, wet tunnel) I'm scared!
-Gazepaw
Shadepaw glanced over his shoulder at Ashpaw, who smiled. He turned back and gave a brisk nod. "We'll go into the tunnels."
Ashpaw nodded also, then looked at Adder, who was looking back at her. She gave a small smile.
(Perfect pic)
Shadepaw flicked his tail, then Ashpaw came to his side. Together, they walked into the tunnel.
[Grayshadow and Adder walked along the shore.Then they came across Hazelstep.They buried him where he was.They gathered quite a few cats.Once they were sure that they had everyone they headed back and went into the tunnels]
(Scared, she stepped into to the tunnel)
I can do this, I can do this. (even though she knows she couldn't)
-Gazepaw
122!
[A quick figure lightly stepped beside Gazepaw and then there was a tail on Gazepaw's shoulder.Gazepa wlooked over and saw Rainpaw standing there]
[Huh?Why did you say 122 for?]
Birdstar From WoodClan
Come To BrambleClan and WoodClan! I know a special tunnel leading to our territories. We don't have a tornado.
Laying her tail over Gazepaw's shoulders, Ashpaw purred. "It's okay, Gazepaw."
Shadepaw purred also. "We're here with you."
Swifthearts padds with confidence throgh the black walls of the tunnel, but what dreamstar doesn't know, Is that he is guided by a voice as well.
Swiftheart
(Oops, forget the tail-shoulder part)
Oops you guys already have a tunnel
O.k. I'll try. It's the only way. (padds with them into the tunnel)
-gazepaw
Tawnyheart padds through the tunnel, but notices somethingh different about gazestripe, her best friend, you is right beside her)
Wait! If you would like come with us to Brambleclan and WoodClan!
[Dreamstar went on cautiously.Then she felt two pelts brushing her.She smelt the two cats scent.She breathed in deeply.the she looked to her sides.Standing on one side was Cloudriver.her old mate,and on the other side,her mother Moonlily.Moonlily was bruatlly murdered when Dreamstar was made deputy]
"Don't won't Dreamstar.All is fine.We are here"
Moonlily mewed like nothing was wrong.Moonlily's and Cloudriver's scent wrapped around Dreamstar
Dreamstar~ Can you see my comments? BrambleClan and I asked you if you would want to come to WoodClan and BrambleClan
Shadepaw and Ashpaw, side by side and pelts brushing, padded confidently into the darkness. Every once in a while, Shadepaw would have to nudge Gazepaw along. It didn't bother him at all.
Ashpaw was still watching Adder, focusing on his every move. Suddenly, she violently shook her head. 'What am I doing!!' she yowled in her mind, so loud that she was suprised nobody heard it through her ears.
(Swiftheart felt that the way dreamstar shuddered, starclan cats were there) We will make it with starclan by our side, or we will join them.
[Yes I can see your comments.Sure.We'll go there.]
Dreamstar
(gazepaw blinked gratefully at shadepaw for the help)
[Adder looked ahead.Then he looked at Grayshadow and all the cats.He relized that he did belong.Even if his family had abandoned him]
Adder
Hissing, he narrowed his eyes. "WoodClan," he spat, hoping no one heard him. They didn't seem to.
[Dreamstar followed Swiftheart as they headed for WoodClan.The wind roared outside.There was a low moaning sound a a huge tree fell in front of their entrance.]
Swiftheart knows there is a cat in these tunnels with a gift.....he can scence it. There are many of Starclan with us. even Briarstar.
[Rainpaw looked at Shadepaw confused]
What's wrong with WoodClan Shadepaw?
Rainpaw
He blinked at Gazepaw, then pressed his muzzle briefly to hers and purred.
Ashpaw didn't notice. She was still watching Adder, cursing herself in her mind.
Hey! We are just trying to help Shadepaw! Follow me towards this tunnel
(secretly high fives dreamstar for no reason)
Oh no I mewed hmm I think I can try to climb over it let me see
[Okay Swiftstar...]
(I know it's kinda random!)
Shadepaw looked around, confused. "Huh, what?" He averted his gaze from Rainpaw's. "Oh, nothing." He held back a growl, remembering how a WoodClan warrior had attacked and killed his sister for accidentally crossing their border. He flexed his claws, imagining them tearing the warrior's pelt once more.
[It seems kind of like there is a love triangle going on here!Sort of.]
draw a diagram for us, dreamstar
[Adder saw Shadepaw flex his claws.Then Adder remembered something about WoodClan too.adder then growled]
Adder
No!That would give stuff away!
Woodclan warriors lets push over this tree I mewed
O.k! I wasn't really wanting it either
We heaved the tree passed the tunnel entrance. Ok I panted
We are here! Let's go!
Duskstar & Warriors
Its going to be a little windy out here I said
Shadepaw glanced at Adder, wondering if it had been the same warrior. He scanned the crowd of WoodClan for the mottled brown pelt. He didn't see him. 'Good ridiance.' he thought darkly.
(I don't care if I spelled 'ridiance' wrong)
(Gazestripe's head starts pound with the starclan's words)
no.... turn back...... the tunnels...... not Birdstar.....
[Adder had a flashback.He fell on the ground.Remembering the horrid moment when he was hunting beside the WoodClan border.But he wasn't in WoodClan territory.Then [in the flash back]Adder heard a low hiss.A large brown tom leaped out at him.The tom hissed.saying that Adder was on the wrong side of the border.But then Adder's mother Wisp,leaped out and took the attack.Wisp fell to the ground.Blood pouring out of her throat.Adder yowled in the flash back.Then he was back.he yowled again.Cats turned to look at him.He just stodd there]
(swiftheart growls)
[Adder then growled as he saw a brown shape shifting through the crowd.Adder growled.Then he heard Shadepaw sigh.Then growl as he saw this brown warrior]
Yes I know we are from different clans but we are just trying to help. We would never let a clan die without trying to help.
(I know these cats have pasts, we cannot trust Woodclan) Know not woodclan......(the voices that came to Gazestripe came to him)
-Swiftheart
The tunnel felt muddy under my heavy tired paws. The warriors had run here. And I could here the crashing and loud snaps of the monster above us. It swarmed in circles challenging us cats. But right now all that mattered was getting the cats to safety. And for me to stay focused. I heard the thumming of cats paws ahead and behind me. Cats for ages used this tunnel for many different. The wonders of the clans was amazing and just memorable. Ohhhh ahh ya stay focused here.
[Adder saw the brown warrior smirk as he saw Adder and Shadepaw.Adder leaped forward.Hissing.He could not let this cat mock him!]
adder
He hissed under his breath, looking to see if Rainpaw heard. He didn't seem to. Shadepaw shrugged and nudged on Gazepaw.
Ashpaw looked worridly at Adder, then mentally bit her tail. 'What are you doing!!' she screamed in her head. She shuddered and padded on.
We can't just stand here. Come on Barkleaf should have some herbs in the camp I hissed
WoodClan is just fine.
We are all the same. Cats with journeys. Cats with courage. Cats with problems and need to focuse. LOL
(swiftheart knows what adder was doing, but didn't try to stop it.) (Let him do it....... that brown warrior deserves it)
(oh, and this creature hasn't been here yet!! thats later! Dreamstar is the one who made it up in the first place!
My warriors padded on with me. Hey I mewed, "stop hissing and growling!" I told my warriors
Shadepaw flexed his claws and stopped in his tracks as he saw the mottled brown tom. He flexed his claws over and over again. "You killed my sister, you heap of worthless fox-dung." he growled, then moved to Adder's side.
I think I'm the only problem with focuse problem here.
Ok so lets get going!
[The brown tom was ready.Before Adder could land on the brown tom,the tom reached up and hooked a claw in Adders throat.Adder tried to yowl,but the only sound was gurgling.The brown tom let go.Silverfang ran forward.With herbs in her mouth.She started to treat adder]
The brown tom smirked. "The mouse-cat deserved to die."
Shadepaw dug his claws into the ground. One more wise crack from this mouse-brain, and he was dead in the mud.
I ran over to my warrior and I growled, "How could you hurt a cat!" I will banish you from WoodClan!
[Actually Swiftstar,I never said that there was a creature.And anyways.IF there was a creature it could have been dead by now]
(swiftheart knew this cat was important he could not let him die!) He leaped on the brown tom, and bit his ear off)
(what should I call the cat, I guess Mudpelt)
"Adder-" Ashpaw stopped herself from yowling to the skies. Instead, she went to his side and started to lick the blood away.
(adder is important to the proophecy!) He landed blow after blow, willing shadepaw to help get his revenge)
I creeped up on Mudpelt, SKAT! I yelped you will never be honored as a great cat! I grabbed the cat by the scruff and led it outside the tunnel you should be ashamed
(not all of his ear off!)
Mudpelt smirked at his leader. "The scrawny she-cat crossed the border, following that scrap." He motioned to Shadepaw, who hissed.
I'm sorry Adder that your sister died I never found out
one more word, and then you'll have no ears left! (swiftheart said, snarling)
[Silverfang finished up.She said that he should live.Seeing of how the wound was treated soon enough and he didn't lose to much blood.
Adder slowly lifted his head.The brown tom was just smirking at him.Mocking him.Adder let out a hiss of anoyance and tried to get up,but stopped when he gasped for air and from pain]
Shadepaw couldn't take it any longer. He followed Birdstar and asked, "Permission to do this?"
Mudpelt flattened his ears.
I said this is no time for fighting we should be helping. Mudpelt you know I am stronger than you and I'm your leader and I told you SKAT!!!
It's o.k. adder. If this cat deserves to die, then he will!
"Relax, mouse-brain. Lay still." She continued her fluent licking.
[It was Adder's mother]
And snake-kit over here[he flicked his head to Adder]well.I just felt like killing him.It looked like he was about to cross the border so.Ya.But then his mother got in the way.
Mudpelt
Do want you want to him. I couldn't stand to look at Mudpelt (in my brain I knew we shouldn't hurt Mudpelt)
Duskstar could do nothing but just watch. Cats fight. She remembered DeathClan. She remembered everything they did. Then she remembered the rogues. My mouth grew dry. The rogues well we called them the "Stalkers". They killed my mom. My mom, my leader, my clanmates, and everything they could touch. I growled. "Stop all this!" "WoodClan is trying to help and I know old memories can attack you but please don't fight,"
Adder growled when Mudpelt talked about is mother and him like they were pieces of dung.
(shadepaw, he needs to die!)
Mudpelt how you dare kill a cat! You disobeyed the warrior code!! Now SKAT! And I don't want to see you EVER again!
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