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Friday, July 24, 2009

Sneak Peek of Dreamstar's Life!Prologue!

Here is the prologue of Dreamstar's life.Hope you like it!Because this is the only sneak peek you will ever get of the actual book!At least until it is finished!Enjoy!And comment!

Lakestar was walking to the Moon Pool.After a long battle with SunClan,LakeStar was leaving his clan to talk to StarClan.Lot's of cats were hurt.But he knew his medicine cat,Swiftmoon,and his deputy,Sorrelfrost,would take care of LakeClan.But he also knew that Swiftmoon would not be able to save all of the cats.He was worried.Worried for his clan and worried that it was a mistake to leave his clan now.

"What will StarClan tell me"Lakestar mewed while shaking his head to clear all thoughts.

Lakestar finally arrived and licked up some water.Slowly,as if StarClan were taunting him,he faded into blackness.

Hello Lakestar.We know why you are here.But we can't help you that much.But I can help you with something"The StarClan cat mewed calmly as if nothing was happening below.

The starry gray ancestor,Graymoon,looked at Lakestar.Graymoon was testing hm.To see if Lakestar is worthy enough to receive this prophecy that could change his life.

"Lakestar.Are you ready.Or should I wait for another leader.I need you to be calm.Because this prophecy will not happen for awhile.But will always be there"Graymoon blinked her silvery/blue eyes and stared at Lakestar.Waiting for a response.

Lakestar was not sure what to say.He tried to return the look that Graymoon gave him.He looked at her with his dull green eyes.Trying to prove that he should be the one to receive this prophecy.Graymoon just let out a mrrow of laughter and started to whisper.Her whisper turned into thousands of voices spinning around Lakestar.Each voice was an echo of the one before.

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Seconds,hours,so many days,break every rule so there is nothing between you and your dreams,you can go higher,you can go deeper,there are no boundaries,above or beneath,but you give me one good reason,to fight and never walk away,with every step you climb another mountain,every breath is harder to believe,there are no boundaries to stop this dream."

Then the voices stopped and Lakestar found himself beside the Moon Pool.But he could still here an echo of Graymoon's voice.Saying the prophecy.Engraving it into Lakestar's mind.


Lakestar slowly walked back to LakeClan.He was tired and did not want to find out what happened while he was gone.His beautiful silver tail dragged along the ground.His dull green eyes were sunken.Without any hope for his clan left.His silver/black fur was torn and ripped.His wounds were sore.But most of all.His mind was stopped.He could not think of what that prophecy meant.And by what Graymoon said.This cat that would save LakeClan.Would not come for many moons and seasons to come.LakeClan would be gone by then.Forgotton.By all cats.
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When Lakestar got back to camp.He saw six cats in the middle of the camp.Not moving.The clan was gathered around.Shaken and scared.They all looked up when they heard Lakestar walk in.The clan's eyes were dull and frightened.They mewed their joy.But stopped when they saw his eyes.They then knew that there was no hope for living.Swiftmoon walked up to Lakestar and gently put her tail on his shoulder and guided him to her den.

"Lakestar.I know you are shocked.I know six cats are dead.I tried to save them.I really did.But they had wounds that I could not fix.But I will tell you which cats later.Right now,I need to treat you."Swiftmoon mewed shaken like the clan.

But Lakestar already knew which cats were dead.Littlebranch.A brave young warrior.Redear.A senoir warrior who was very strong.Featherpaw.A new apprentice who was very small.Dawnleaf.A beautiful warrior and was Lakestar's mate.Goldenblossom.A feirce new warrior with a kind heart.And Maplefrost.A very shy warrior who was very strong.

Lakestar did not hear a thing Swiftmoon was telling him.He was thinking of the prophecy.When he saw images of a queen giving birth,Sorrelfrost on the ground dying,and Lakestar losing his last life.Lakestar knew that the future would not be good.But then he heard the prophecy again.


Then he saw a kit.And he knew that this kit would save the clan.No matter how long it would take.Lakestar would watch over this kit until it saved the clan from all dangers.

6 comments:

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☪Dream said...

Why?

☪Dream said...

Does anyone even like the prologue!!!???

Sally said...

wow! i really like it! i just want to know more

Freddi Bonsai said...

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